Powerful offering, Elga. So often we take one wrong step and end up in a place where we find ourself dodging bullets and harsh words. There is always light beyond the cyclone, though while in the midst, it is often difficult to see.
Take care,
Sherry
I can relate to the emotions that you express within your verses, Elga. Do we ever really "learn" lessons about love and such? I don't know. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Lessons learned in Darkness often result in some wondrous answers such as our seeing more clearly when emerging into Light.
A fine poem, Elga!
Find the eye, the center, of your emotional storm. A powerful, apt comparison, excellently penned. Well done. As A StormSpinner, I wish I'd written this! Keeping.
The similarities of life and storm can find one within the emotional turmoil that comes from a cyclone effect ...whirlwinds toss the mind around and clouds dampen the spirit, yet it is the center where one finds peace...and when all else fails...the storm passes and sunshine exposes the Light of the world...
nice work....
Art Sun...
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Yes my dear you can! You've written a gut-wrenching poem from a heart that has seen and felt too much pain, but I sense you are one bloody strong woman! Blessings, Holly
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
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Artful and magnificent... "Eye of the Cyclone" makes foam from waves of sublimity... A poetic bouquet of Nature's flowers diffusing scented wonders.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Fee
Take care,
Sherry
Regis
A fine poem, Elga!
Beautiful write,, Christine
Have I missed you! Welcome home. :)
Find the eye, the center, of your emotional storm. A powerful, apt comparison, excellently penned. Well done. As A StormSpinner, I wish I'd written this! Keeping.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
nice work....
Art Sun...