The Moments (poem) by Sandra A. Mushi on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on September 9, 2007

Touching. Sad. A very good write.

Reviewed by Ingrid Khola (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2006

Sad reality, great write. I like how you refer to Zanzibar and Serengeti so to make people aware of the beauties of your country, well done Sandra.
Ingrid

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on March 23, 2006

I like the pattern and 'beat' of this prose! Also, thanks for including a link of your country so we could take a 'tour'. I really enjoyed it...

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi

Reviewed on February 24, 2006

This has very outspoken passages but very beautiful poetic moments too. What you express is of great concern and it is good to thematise it.

Reviewed by Victoria Murray

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Very nice write, my friend!

Hugs,

V~

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Goes to show you that we should NEVER take someone for granted. Someone out there isn't wearing blinders.

Wonderful write!!! ;) Silver

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

Thanks for pointing me to this.

It is as you say very similar to my 'Differences' but with less humour but a lot more feeling.

David

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Sandra,
aahhh...what moments and then oh what moments'.
then hmmmmm the moments ....okay'.
The moments and all it's moods is a fascinating tale
that is perfectly lined , well timed and it's intensely
sensual!
You did an outstanding job on this, ( in my humble opinion.
peace and live life fulfilled',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on June 14, 2005

hm. an interesting perspective, but i think you got it right. marriage is hard, hard, hard, and this is a tesimony to the things that tempt us, that pull us in different directions when the original commitment is lost, or forgotten, and life, as things that happen in the meantime, catches us up. well done, poet.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 14, 2005

"The Moments For Two" is an outstanding composition.
It is a poetic live voice.

I have enjoyed the reading, and have learned from this writing
par excellence. "The Moments For Two" shows the dancing quill
of a true Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 11, 2005

A powerful message, Sandie. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on June 10, 2005

wow, you caught a lot of the problem with marriage or just the monotony of a relationship. you forget to work it...i don't think a woman has to spend 24/7 being a vamp when she has a life to attend to but it sure doesn't help to spend a little time being the girl he remembers...if you want him to remember at all

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 9, 2005

excellent message in this write, sandie! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 9, 2005

Sandra this excellent poem should be a warning to all women.
Well done! Good to see you back!;-)

Eileen