Enter me…
Tight darkness,
Encompassing enclosure pulsating -
A heart beat? -
Twisting warmth, cool breeze,
Ethereal fingertips stroking, teasing,
Welcoming, nay, urging you deeper
And deeper,
Deeper into the labyrinth that is me,
Into the circular space,
Into the spiral where we will dance,
Our rhythm intuitive myth,
Hips swaying with song,
Into the dark, sheltered and pressed,
Squeezed through the passage,
Fingers splayed where we will consecrate
This holy place -
Enter me…
Where the veil is thin,
Enter me,
Where breath and emptiness entwine,
Where life is the absence of life,
Enter me (taste the salt of the dead),
Enter me (embrace the life of my life),
Pulsate within, touch my inner walls,
Spiral deeper and deeper into me,
As I will call your name,
As I will call your name…
Dena L Moore
June 30, 2007
An Ode consecrated to Newgrange…..
Well said, and perhaps, said in soft alluring whisper I would imagine:)
Great pen
Chase:)
The flow of this is soft and lyrical...the imagery is softly sensual...erotic even depending on how the reader approaches it.
And it is that fact that really makes this work outstanding...for it can be read as a sensul, erotic piece, it can be read as a spritual journey...it can be read with the mystical and magical in mind.
This is outstanding work, lady poet.
Amor
Magical poetry
I felt every movement bringing back memories...oh if only they were reality once more.
Miller