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Death Of a Stranger
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Poetry by Liana Margiva

The drifter was taken to the gallows…
The people were rejoicing everywhere,
But poor heart of mine was mourning
And, for an instant, our souls were one.

It was I, who stepped into the Chamber of Death,
Hands tied behind my back
To touch the fallen tear unable.

It was I, who had a scarf wrapped around my neck
To ease the pain of strangulation.

It was I, who was facing the loop of the rope,
My last window on the world I was leaving.

It was my eyes that were blindfolded
So that no one could see my tears.

It was my soul that was trembling,
Silently begging for mercy.

It was I who stepped on the trap door
And into the bottomless abyss,
The never-ending fall.

I knew with my mind that a felon
Was being brought to justice,
But my eyes refused to comply with reason,
Shedding tears for the loathesome creature.

Tonight he will rest in the grave.
Soggy soil as his mattress and pillow,
And a coffin lid as his blanket.

Tomorrow morning he will not awaken
For the first time in his miserable life.
Death will cure his ailments,
The pain will pass, left above the grave
Together with love, sorrow and doubts.

Tonight his soul will tremble
For the first time facing the ones he slaughtered.
His lifeless skin will shiver
At the sight of innumerable victims
Gathered to judge him.



Countless moans will fill the air,
Reverberating through the underworld
‘’Why did you torture and murder us?
For what greater purpose we suffered?’’
The martyrs will cry out.

From this night on he will be condemned to solitude,
His universe shrunk to the space of the coffin.
Death will pardon his offences,
The grave will console him with peace,
And the Earth will be merciful too,
By not weighing too heavy on the diseased.


Liana Margiva

(Translated  from  Russian   by Anatol V. Kardiukov)
 


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 Reviews of "Death Of a Stranger"
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on September 24, 2023

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on August 28, 2023
An excellently written poem, thank you for sharing it,
Steve

Reviewed on July 25, 2011
one word for it : Beautiful ...

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 7, 2010
A STUNNING WORK! A HAUNTING CRY OF PITY FOR THE GUILTY...DONE WITH SUPERB ARTISTRY THAT IS LIANA MARGIVA'S ALONE. GOD BLESS YOU NOTABLE POET, AND THANK YOU FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Powerful write Liana and writen with
excellence! Heartfelt too write on!


Much Love
Always!!

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
I sense a divine feeling of love and compassion in these unrivalled and striking words.

Tis true we should have mercy for all God's creatures

Jerry

Reviewed by Michael Gibbs
Reviewed on August 30, 2009
Powerful stuff. Death is always a release, a fact we don't like to think about. Beautifully written. I love it.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
Liana, the writing here is moving and painful and brutal as you invite us to participate in the awful reality of the gallows. As horrible and dedestable the crime may be, we--judges and onlookers--must share the the pain and face the loop of the executioner's rope--one of the most uncivilized things we do in a civilized society. I am drawn particularly to these powerful lines:

The drifter was taken to the gallows…
The people were rejoicing everywhere,
But poor heart of mine was mourning
And, for an instant, our souls were one.

Remarkable writing. -gene.


Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
Reviewed on March 24, 2009
Liana ;
Shivers from the grave and echoes of the insane here .
Great work !
From Paul

Reviewed on February 12, 2009
"Tonight his soul will tremble
For the first time facing the ones he slaughtered.
His lifeless skin will shiver
At the sight of innumerable victims
Gathered to judge him."

your words are spiritually impactual to the depths of our own soul
eternity is so much longer than our time on earth & no deed goes into a memory of forgotten memories

Much Love & Inspiration
Vickie

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey
Reviewed on February 2, 2009
This poetry is chilling in its honesty, but hopeful still in its promise of mercy. It speaks of justice and judgment, of mercy and peace. Death of a Stranger draws the reader into the felon's experience and show us his hope--that of pardon when his penalty is paid.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on January 20, 2009
This was writing of the highest order...Even within the confines of the coffin and death, there is mercy..'Death will pardon his offences, The grave will console him with peace...'
I found this gripping, yet very moving...

Love, Diana

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
This is wonderful poetry. Write on.

Love,
Sandy

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2009
An excellent write, Holly

Reviewed by Drew Bartley (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2009
I agree Liana, this is so intense and powerful.

drew bartley

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 10, 2009
Liana, this is so powerful...so chilling...you brought us there with the gift of your pen.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 10, 2009
Any poet that can hold the interest, paint the picture and create the intense feeling of being there, is a Master Poet...and you are. Well done, for this was Spectacular Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 10, 2009
A deep and powerful poem ! It takes one the the depth of such a travesty and beyond.....M

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Frightening and real ... so very emotive, to the depths of the soul. Well done Liana. Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Your writing has always amazed me
Your poetry is one I wait for with anticipation
For I enjoy each word, you scribe
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
Empathy is a unique gift. Without it, the core of a human being is lost and life is meaningless.
I love these lines in particular, there is so much that can be imagined here:
"The pain will pass, left above the grave
Together with love, sorrow and doubts"

Axilea

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
the loss of even the most condemnable among us, is never the less, a monumental loss -- a void unable to be filled by any other living soul -- your poem serves to intricately weave the entire fabric of a being who served not the interest of his fellow man well -- yet deep within the heart of us all, compassion for the loss of him beats with a pulse still strong -- may love and peace dance at your feet 'till joy will ask that you repeat -- JMW

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
You write with such vivid passion on this tragic topic, Liana...a very powerful write!

Carole~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
All the imagery presented in such a spectacular fashion, keeping the interest and need to know through the ending...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Liana, I was there with you...images were so realistic...you've written this in a powerful form. The images portrayed in my mind as I read this were so real, as though it was for certain. Truly a great write and one that will linger in this readers mind.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Liana,
Powerful, stirring, moving and vivid, the images strike with great force and meaning; thoroughly satisfying writing.
John

Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Liana~!

Imaged perfectly - outstanding penning!!


LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Splendid vivid poetry.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Liana, You have penned quite a chiller. I felt everything that you described in this tale of murder, conviction, and death. One always wonders what a convicted person that is about to be executed really feels, and thinks about. Your poem opens my eyes to possibilities.
Very well thought out and written.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Excellent write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
This is magnificent poetry! You had mne there with you
going through all the emotions! Kudo's, Liana!


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