(02)Integrity (poem) by Douglas W Bentley on AuthorsDen

(02)Integrity
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**************************************************************************** The battle of the flesh and the soul To do what's right When there is one else around Not a human being in sight To stand againt the temptation To saddle up and fight. I was charging forward Artillery landing to the left Shells exploding to the right My horse in a steady gallop With or without me He wasn't about to stop. *************************************************************************** His eyes fixed on the lead Horse Which showed a brilliant white Like a lightning bolt Dazzling like a colt A Jerusalem desert backdrop Somehow I managed to stay on top. I was wounded Just hanging on The battle ahead Already riding over the dead I slapped my horse And yelled "Faster." ************************************************************************** Now in full battle charge I held the rank Not to be divided The cavalry united Armour complete ready for the ride Weapon by my side. The GENERAL signaled to me "Blow the bugle now!" The fight was on. My lips dry My face bleeding Just gave it more meaning. ***************************************************************************** Written by Douglas W Bentley (c) 2006 All rights reserved. This poem is the property of Douglas Wayne Bentley and may not be reproduced, republished, distributed, transmitted, displayed, broadcast, blogged, google’d or otherwise exploited in any manner without prior written permission. You may print this poem from this website for your personal and non-commercial use only, without altering or removing any trademark, copyright or other notice from such material. For further reviews/comments see: http://chspoetry.wikispaces.com/message/view/MY+POETRY+PAGE/18799855

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 15, 2014

well said

Reviewed by Berva Dawn (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

What a very thrilling write.
Left me with chills!

BDB

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on March 17, 2010

Dear Douglas, no wonder this piece have thousands and thousands of hits. Every line makes me feel like i'm in the middle of the battle where brave men and women fight with selflessness and integrity. I'm glad I stumbled on this captivating piece. Peace and love in Christ.

Sheri

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

A very dynamic post Douglas
Complete with the united nobility of principled integrities
closing with the adherence of dignity
Peace & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 16, 2009

INTEGRITY - STANDING UP FOR WHAT ONE BELIEVES IN DESPITE THE COST...IT IS GOD GIVEN AND THE INSTANCES REQUIRING UP TO 'STAND' WILL GO ON UNTIL WE ARE SAFE IN HIS ARMS. BLESSINGS. THANKS FOR THE SHARE. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on August 28, 2008

Fighting well even til the end. That is what good soldiers are for and what they do. I enjoyed this going into the battle poem.

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

Commitment to the cause, the warrior has no fear in the face of adversity. Such strength in your imagery Douglas. What a knight! Panda :)

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

A grand snatshot of a moment in real life, or the minds eye of imagination. I enjoyed the spiritual aspects of this write also.

No one ever said we would slide into home base in good shape.

Kudos Poet ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Superb animated poetry DWB! You took us into battle with you except we don't have the wounds. Thanks for sharing! Kudo's!

Eileen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

The charge into battle...riding hard and the steed ,as fierce a soldier as the warrior....doing the bidding from the touch or yank of the reigns..moving as one in battle...awesome marriage caught with your pen. Exceptional action piece.
Susan