"I Believe": Splendid, touching and cheering. Simple words, crafted sensitively. A poem that makes the reader think of moving moments in his or her own past and, above all, of moments just as good - many of them - that are waiting, some eagerly and others patiently, but that are all, each of them, yet to come. Most enjoyable.
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2003
Very well written and an excellent poem.
Greetings.
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
i believe you wrote this so well, and thanks you for sharing such a lovely write...take care...Mark
It takes so much to look inward, then reflect back on paper. Yours was wonderful.
Reviewed by Ann
Reviewed on January 28, 2003
The poem was wonderful informative personal wording that tells about you in s very short poem. I like to read plain poetry that tells a whole story. Thanks
Victoria, you have a very "soft" beguiling way of saying what you want to say. And I believe in many of the same things. Things of value. Really enjoyed the poem. If you have time, take a look at Long Gone Love and Willow in Authorsden.com. I think you'll like them. I'll be back-Jerry- Have a good holiday season!
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2002
I still believe and this poem makes me happy. Thank you. I will e-you soon. Not tonight though, I am too tired to go into all that has happened. I love you, thank you for the support. Happy Holidays.
Love, JC xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
I believe in long deep wet kisses that last three days....
...Bull Durham
Yeah, old fashioned hand-holding...fireside lounging with coco in the fall...driving through the autumn-flamed woods...wading beside the sea with someone as mysterious to you as the ocean's hidden floor...these thing seem to belong to a simpler better age. Thanks for taking me back there.
Beautiful sentiment Victoria. When I look at how the world is It makes me wonder how we all got so far from each other.
Reviewed by lana hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2002
After reading only a few of your poems, especially this one. I feel as if I have met you already. We have a lot in common. You are real, You are YOU. That's a secret key to happiness. You're a woderful writer.
Lana H.
Reviewed by Debbie Tipton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2001
It is so great to believe. This was great and keep on believing.
When all is said and done the simple things in life, too often abandoned for the glitz, are the most satisfying and fulfilling.
You have encapsulated this philosophy in this most readable and inspirational poem.
I agree with Horace (*Ars Poetica*) -"It is not enough for poems to be fine; they must charm, and draw the mind of the listener at will...."- and WE agree with you.
Yeah! Relationships are more rewarding when taken slowly. Good poem, nice ideas.
Reviewed by Tyrone Godfrey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2001
I'd like to meet you in person as well.
Very well writen.
Reviewed by lizbeth star (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2001
VERY SEXY AND WELL SAID!
Reviewed by Lila Mae Channing
Reviewed on September 26, 2001
WOW! What a romantic poem! Ms. Murray I think deep down inside we all want these things in wanting to start a relationship with someone special--whomever you had in mind when you wrote this poem is indeed a lucky man!
It's nice to see that some of us still enjoy romance as much as I do! Very well put...!
And thank you for your very kind comment on mine...
Yours Truly...
Gilles...
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Greetings.
Good job here.
Beautiful!
Reindeer
Best wishes always
from
Kay.
so romantic and the only way to get to know them.
Excellent poetry.
Peggy
Love, JC xoxoxoxo
...Bull Durham
I enjoyed this Victoria.
-James
well said
I believe in Santa too
Caryn
Lana H.
Sandie Angel :o)
You have encapsulated this philosophy in this most readable and inspirational poem.
I agree with Horace (*Ars Poetica*) -"It is not enough for poems to be fine; they must charm, and draw the mind of the listener at will...."- and WE agree with you.
Thanks, Victoria!
Gina
Very well writen.
Everyone has a story, I really like to hear it.
And thank you for your very kind comment on mine...
Yours Truly...
Gilles...
I love this...kind of took me back to my childhood...
Great poem...
Thank's,
Trixie