
SHIPS OF RELATIONS
By H.J. Cruz
7/28/07
Look yee unto the bay, find yer merry ship o fools,
Aye, dar’s war ships en worships, dar’s whore ships wit-out wenches. Dar’s a court ship wit-out a court, en sum friendships, companion ships, en evon a feu dictatorships. But not a flag stays on the mass head fer long, excepun dat one. She’s the true flag ship; Da ship o relations, en mighty battle scared is she!
Communication break down,
Two parts of a frown.
I thought he/ she said,
Foreign image in a head,
One word too many,
One word too few,
Expressive heart language
Long over due.
I love your this,
Don’t give me that!
I want your kiss,
Save formalities chat.
O the pleasantries of extremities
Brought O Sirus to his knees,
I need a mid section,
For lusty circumspection.
How we relate
Often casting fate,
When thoughts become frank,
Emotion tenders the spank,
With eyes of truth
Character’s fragility a-spook.
Can fleshy bone
Give spirit atone?
How to love indiscriminate,
Unconditionally substantiate.
How to love without possibles, point or penis.
Now to love without politics, purpose or passion.
Oh the pressure, pretense and promenade,
Mission’s impossible serenade.
As a river to an ocean,
Endless tributaries of devotion,
Another squall or all’s dead calm,
Ships- relations temper drama & psalm.
Regis
YOu 0utdid yourself on your thinking and writing here!
I feel a sad pain, in your wording!
Hang In!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Ships of Fools, can be many thoughts and relationships in depth!
Love the X-ray pict. Way Kewl! Passing Time, I see...
:-)
Character’s fragility a-spook
Excellent.....fragile characters do indeed spook at truthful eyes,
If the character is full of lies.
Walt
I love it, beautifully expressed and
Very profound poetic thoughts
But yes I have to agreed with Amber
The ship of relations in realty is
A ship of foolish attempts.
Hugsss Love Peace and Joy to you always...Morning Star
Great write!!!
Georg
Very deep poem, HJ, But very thought provoking. I am loving your book, thank you.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"