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Semi-comatose
by Pat Alvarado → (All Poetry by Pat Alvarado)
  
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The sun peeked from behind a cloud
and shot a beam through my window.
It struck me in the eye and knocked me out of bed!

I plodded off to work
Hastened by the hour,
Mingling among the crowds,
With dreamy cobwebs clinging
And sleep turned sour.

My eyes -
Oh, my eyes -
How they wish to close!
My body remains alert,
But I am semi-comatose.

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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
somtimes we just don't have a choice ...

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
EXCELLENT WRITE!!!


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