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Submerge into Ecstasy
by Seed4ever D. D. → (All Poetry by Seed4ever D. D.)
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Submerge into Ecstasy


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When he went to town
It’s was the funniest thing you’ve ever seen
He bounced up and down
Like a nervous Kangaroo on a trampoline

On the way back
He became calm so relaxed felt just right
Black as tarmac
Was the package hiding nicely out of sight

Sitting in his chair
Beaming big eyes he laid his prize on the table
Smiling with no care
Knowing he could devour the contents and was able

A cool breeze blows over his goose bump skin
Wanting to submerge into ecstasy
He opens the bag takes a breath and looks within
Two poppadoms and a chicken curry
  

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 Reviews of "Submerge into Ecstasy"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 17, 2007
hahahaha
really nice surprise and yes cleva

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Isn't it amazing the things that can bring ecstasy? and boy is this delightful!

Kathy

Reviewed by Maalikaya C (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
and fresh chatni? you made me hungry for some...

let's go eat
after the alphabet

hmmmm so yummy

Reviewed by Barbara Mercer
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
So clever and hilariously multifaceted, it sparkles with creativity Dave, waves of love}}}}}}}} Barbara

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Wow! A gimlet with those poppadoms and chicken curry would be - perfection!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
a clever write-i enjoyed it completely

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
A delightful piece, so lively and a nice twist at the end...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
two poppadoms

What are they?
Sounds like something worth waiting for.
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
Great write my friend, imagery is outstanding, loved the ending!
Blessings,
Joyce B.


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