My body senses what my mind yet has to register,
Call it gut instinct or simply an eerie sense of calm
Moonbeams reveal a vaporous presence
Swaying to the beat of a broken branch
Its light precariously dangles before my thoughts
Over the cryptic narration of a abundantly windy terrain
Its atmosphere is ubiquitous
Even while traversing its nothingness,
The motif of my temperament
Conceives its variance of plot
Like in an unfinished book
Written without a storyline,
I endeavor
To free myself from bibliography or its reference
Perhaps one of the blank pages
Foreshadows the coming events
I have passed over
Perhaps the origin of my words
Yearns to be pressed firmly
Into the ink of reflection,
Where clarity surrenders its influence
To the power of idea,
Absorbing fibers
Layered along the pulp of my being
The hair on my neck is raised
Electrical, static charged
And it’s time for me to run
And keep running
Through the binding
Holding me together
Shouting “no can be truly free while standing still”
Reminding me where I came from
And how long it will take to arrive
Much to think about; much to reflect upon. Your words gracefully project themselves into our minds. Beautiful words...almost inciting, but definately exciting!.
Powerful and enthusiastically written piece moving forward at high speed. A little time out for the world to catch up seems to be needed, what a fantastic write....
I love the message you wrap in such dynamic and eloquent words!
You jump-start my battery,and I feel like I now have all the drive
I need to get me wherever I want to go!Thanks Jude!;-)
Wow very interesting thoughts!
I miss reading your words they
Always give me a reason to ponder!
I agreed with Georg!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star
Hey Jude, I like the last three stanzas, and the closure of your last two lines. For me, you capture the feeling of stagnation, as in when we first awake. Then we have "to run" to get ourselves going and get the day started. Wow, my brain hurts from thinking. Thanks, Kathy
As always, the author will twiested even more our labyrintic brain streets in search of those thoughts we haven't got the courage to confront.
Jude, you have a dangerous pen, and even more dangerous Muse.
You make us think!!!
It rather sounds like you are already there; put your mind into park and set the break, everything else will catch up and the new reality will be yours. You have done a great job at creating a sense of forward motion in this piece.
Take care,
Sherry
Hopefully you're already there my friend. It was meant to be and if you're not already there then you shall shortly arrive. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
BINGO!!!! SPOT ON!!! I know this feeling! Grinning from ear to ear.... WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Rabbit Jump Forever xxxxx Go do it, Kartero! :)))) xxxx
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
Love ya!
Jane
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Thanks - Micke
Be always safe,
Karen
You jump-start my battery,and I feel like I now have all the drive
I need to get me wherever I want to go!Thanks Jude!;-)
Ron
I miss reading your words they
Always give me a reason to ponder!
I agreed with Georg!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star
Good to read you again Matey!!
Love Tinka
John
Regis
Our mind will play tricks on us.
Ron
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Jude, you have a dangerous pen, and even more dangerous Muse.
You make us think!!!
Georg
Take care,
Sherry
Hopefully you're already there my friend. It was meant to be and if you're not already there then you shall shortly arrive. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.