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Arrival
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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My body senses what my mind yet has to register,
Call it gut instinct or simply an eerie sense of calm

Moonbeams reveal a vaporous presence
Swaying to the beat of a broken branch

Its light precariously dangles before my thoughts
Over the cryptic narration of a abundantly windy terrain

Its atmosphere is ubiquitous
Even while traversing its nothingness,
The motif of my temperament
Conceives its variance of plot

Like in an unfinished book
Written without a storyline,
I endeavor
To free myself from bibliography or its reference

Perhaps one of the blank pages
Foreshadows the coming events
I have passed over

Perhaps the origin of my words
Yearns to be pressed firmly
Into the ink of reflection,
Where clarity surrenders its influence
To the power of idea,
Absorbing fibers
Layered along the pulp of my being

The hair on my neck is raised
Electrical, static charged
And it’s time for me to run

And keep running
Through the binding
Holding me together

Shouting “no can be truly free while standing still”
Reminding me where I came from
And how long it will take to arrive

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 Reviews of "Arrival"
Reviewed on September 12, 2015
Fantastic! No doubt.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on April 9, 2008
A wonderful, talented write full of self-reflection and power as well.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
The last few lines have touched me Jude, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Much to think about; much to reflect upon. Your words gracefully project themselves into our minds. Beautiful words...almost inciting, but definately exciting!.

Thanks - Micke

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Interesting thoughts leaving a lot to ponder. The last stanza is my favorite. Forward we go!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Powerful and enthusiastically written piece moving forward at high speed. A little time out for the world to catch up seems to be needed, what a fantastic write....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I love the message you wrap in such dynamic and eloquent words!
You jump-start my battery,and I feel like I now have all the drive
I need to get me wherever I want to go!Thanks Jude!;-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Been running through my latest book for some time, but can't seem to reach arrival. Your poem reminded me that I need to.

Ron

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Wow very interesting thoughts!
I miss reading your words they
Always give me a reason to ponder!
I agreed with Georg!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star





Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
wonderful write!! The final verse is my favorite!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
A thought provokier Jude!!

Good to read you again Matey!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
...always written in light...I run to catch up with the revelation...penned in Moonbeams...of ones pen...who might yet arrive before me.
John

Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Hey Jude, I like the last three stanzas, and the closure of your last two lines. For me, you capture the feeling of stagnation, as in when we first awake. Then we have "to run" to get ourselves going and get the day started. Wow, my brain hurts from thinking. Thanks, Kathy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Once again you have provided a fountain of substance for reflection, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on February 25, 2008
This surely makes me think Jude.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Excellent Robert..
Our mind will play tricks on us.
Ron

Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Stunning, thought provoking excellence in bold lines - well done, Jude -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Is it Springtime in America North? This is completely BRILLIANT!!!! Each line - i'm AWE struck :D ---> *faints*


Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
As always, the author will twiested even more our labyrintic brain streets in search of those thoughts we haven't got the courage to confront.
Jude, you have a dangerous pen, and even more dangerous Muse.
You make us think!!!

Georg

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Interesting pen Jude,enjoyed..take care...Hugsssss

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
It rather sounds like you are already there; put your mind into park and set the break, everything else will catch up and the new reality will be yours. You have done a great job at creating a sense of forward motion in this piece.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Jude,

Hopefully you're already there my friend. It was meant to be and if you're not already there then you shall shortly arrive. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
BINGO!!!! SPOT ON!!! I know this feeling! Grinning from ear to ear.... WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Rabbit Jump Forever xxxxx Go do it, Kartero! :)))) xxxx


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