How is it that it took only a straw from the wind
to crush the thick walls of your iron gate,
exposing your fictitious face.
It was not your broken walls that shook the land,
neither the sweat from your perfumed brows
that traced the contours of your shameless face.
It was the freedom your fall brought to your prisoners
that gladdened the heart of all.
Nothing lasts forever,
the pillars we build to hedge our thrones,
the delicious offerings of the praises of men,
the soothing hands of generous mistresses,
all the wild drums and rhythms of vanity.
When the wind of retribution blows
all it will take is a tiny splinter
from the roaring arrow of judgment,
or one missed syllable from your porous lips,
one tremor from the cry of vengeance from the oppressed;
or one stubble, one stagger,
to end it all.
Deeply moving poetry with memorable imagery/lines: well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 28, 2007
I love the easy flow of thought in this piece and the relentless press of imagery on the mind of the reader. Wonderful writing and an uplifting message that really touched my heart and spoke my life.
Very inspirational write my dear friend, you are so right, nothing lasts forever, that is in this world anyway. So many today seek for pleasures and treasures in the wrong place, when if only they could see that Heaven and an eternal life is what we should search for. Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
George, your words ring with so much truth! No, "Nothing lasts forever," and we need to hold onto the things we treasure before they slip away. A good poem.
Finally, the commentary that adds even more to the diagramed version of The Easy Study Bible. Follow the diagramed verses of this new clear translation with a verse by verse commentary. Understand even better the New Testament book of Philippians.
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Gina
such quality must be aired. keep it up.
Cryssa
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Thank you.
-=ra=-
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Susan
This poem will cross the boarder of time through the millennia...
"Nothing Lasts Forever" is a profound poetic grand.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Peace.