I've a fondness for the ocean and have set several books near the shore. This poem was written during a time when I was mourning the ocean and just wanted to escape to it.
I feel you.
Your silky softness laps
against my feet and swirls
around my toes.
I taste the sting
on my tongue, feel the grit
on my face, smell your biting salt
in the breeze.
I hear the constant roar
of your crashing fingers
as you calm the day
and bring the night, cool
and quiet and sweet.
I close my eyes and slide
along your satin tresses,
buoyant and free.
I see the sun just pink
slipping over your distant
gray horizon, splashing
color into the day.
I feel you,
so far away.
So close.
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Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Wonderful imagery within this write. I could feel the ocean.
Hugs, Laura
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