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A Mystery
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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He was in love with her arua, a floating mist he could never hold.

He whispered," I love you", into the mist,
He conjured her face, saw the lips he would never kiss.
He shuddered and her aura warmed him, sheltering him from the cold,
She hovered above him, without form, there was nothing for him to hold.
He whispered his love words to the wind,
Her essence he felt, though just pretend.
A voice without a face, softly soothed,
It touched his heart and he was moved.
What caused these feelings, he did not know,
He would hang on tightly and not let go.
Her ghostly presence haunted him each night,
She had no arms to hold him tight.
He was a passionate man and craved physical love,
Though he could not have it from the misty spirit that floated above.
In his fantasy she whispered his name,
But she faded with dawn and just cold nothing remained.
Fate had led her on a different track,
Her life was in progress, with no turning back.
Why had fate let them collide?
Destiny stops her dwelling at his side.
She wished no pain to touch this gentle man,
His feelings for her, she did not understand.
" Why did this happen?", he asks the night sky,
Confused by it all, he just sighs and asks,"WHY!"



 

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 Reviews of "A Mystery"
Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on August 14, 2015
Or, could it be a story of unrequited love, and since he cannot attain a physical relationship with the object of his affection, he is haunted by her aura.

Reviewed on March 12, 2010
This is really awesome. Like a ghost/love story. Perhaps two people in different dimensions. Really enjoyed.

Mary

Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
Wonderfully done my friend! Quite haunting :)

((Hugs and LOve)) ~yourDreamyGal

Reviewed on July 1, 2007
AWESOME My friend!
Filled with a haunt of mystery!
Love this!
YOU keep on writing em'!
Warmly, Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STAY SAFE!
BE Happy!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
Don't ask why, ask whom...
The mysticism lies in the wanting heart not in the question.
A kiss is not just a kiss.
Georg

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
Why?... this tells the tale...a mystic
and mysterious piece SC Very Nice!

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
SC your writing reminds me of a plank of knoty pine board.
One side planed smooth,the other rough as a cob,bothsides full
of knots,each knot has a unique story that makes the board beautiful
and whole.i surley do like your knots rough and smmoth.
This one is so very smooth.it wraps around the reader.
nice SC

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Very beautiful and mysterious write.
Amor

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
I love the dream-like images from this beautiful piece of romance.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Well done! <3

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Great writing SC....
You amaze me...
Hugs.....

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
I see the full moon is inspiring; in succession!
That music is fitting, where you found it one must ask. :0)

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Mysterious and intriguing write here, PA. I can see this one having more "chapters". I enjoyed. Lydi**

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
SC, wow you are really on a roll today...good stuff

Walt

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Many facets make a mystery - Desirous love sometimes simple -Adding more for this review almost impossible - {beautiful} - Ted


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