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faces like dancing angels in the winds
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faces like dancing angels in the winds

 
There are the days you walk remembering
Grey clouds threatening rain unseen
Just the haze of a different sidewalk, another time, what seems like another's life passing by but it's only the past, snatches of forgotten memories, faces like dancing angels in the winds
A lonesome walk across an island, no destination in mind just walking, forgetting and remembering until the faraway city is only a blur and suddenly you're at an airport listening to the jets roar but you are not going anywhere, not this time
Black walkers on clay and asphalt, workmen digging up a road
but you are just passing by on your way to no-where.
And suddenly in the veil of movement a fragile face appears. It is someone that you loved once and all movement stops. You raise your face toward Valhalla, toward heaven, toward paradise, and you see her as she was before your eternal walk. Perhaps you call out her name and hope for an answer but no answer comes and so you walk as you always have
A touch of rain on flesh, warm and soothing
You whisper her name

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 Reviews of "faces like dancing angels in the winds"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 1, 2009
I like this, Bill, its ethereal quality and its truth. Sometimes we don't realize how much we miss an old love until we catch a glimpse of them again whether in real life, dreams, or shifting memory.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
A powerful and loving tribute to your loved one.

I have lost a wife and it took 20 yrs. to write a story about her.
It is on my website titled - "A Slice of A Short Life"

Blessings,

JMD

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on August 25, 2008
Powerful poem just awesome

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
A touch of rain on flesh, warm and soothing
You whisper her name


..poignant lines..

Vesna

Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Such a longinggggg peaceful poem, I believe she helps you to write! She is your inspiration and motivation and will never leave your spirit!
This poems reminds me of Death Wrapped In Sweetness
Write On!
Warm hugs and Peaceful Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Ladyoxoooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Her sprit is always with you, and I have lost my hubby in Aug and still grieve but know he is up with the angels and looking over me. I have proof he is with me in soul and spirit as good things happen to me that did not when he was alive always. Angels surround us always too, and God's work is great and this is a great universe.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
so Zen...wrapped in reflections, awareness...I felt this way waiting for my man at the train stations...longing, in the waiting moments, until he was back in my arms once again
So enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Ethereal and beautiful, this piece matches well the name you chose for it.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Been there done that..just in a different person!!

Deep longing in this write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
A wonderfully embrace and blending of the inner thoughts and the world outside the perimeters....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
.....resonant and fabled, like a modern faerie tale, awaitng its ending. .. . i love the continuity format. ..brings us right into your train of thought.....and all the palces oyu go and intangibles you feel, hope, see...write...
well done.
ness

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
Very nice,William, I can feel the movements as you walk and long for her to respond...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
Great writing,enjoyed...Hugs

Reviewed on March 18, 2008
What a fantastic write. The last line grabs you like a vice. I read the poem three times and enjoyed it more each time. BRAVO poet. Well done. Well done indeed.
Marcia


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