Dark & foreboding. I like the second stanza and the implied uselessness of our actions. How often we rush to the rescue without a clue of what to do once we arrive. Again, your metre is perfect. Great flow.
I'm a big fan.
Leo
This is your journal, for your writing. An interactive journal with historical tidbits designed to nurture creativity and self-motivation, features one side for drawings, sketches, or pasting personal pictures, and the other side lined for notes or j
The Psychic Dimension, Part II (558 pages) is a collection of 36 sci-fi/paranormal stories and the new work is the companion book to Jay Dubya's The Psychic Dimension.
I'm a big fan.
Leo