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Feral Cat Lament
by Mary E Lacey Desertrat → (All Poetry by Mary E Lacey Desertrat)
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We found two kittens outside, one was hit by a car. To save the other one from the same fate, we took him inside. However, he's very unhappy, they say it takes time. I wrote this poem of how he must feel right now.

 

I'm a cat they call feral, and ones most humans don't like
Except for one kind man, he fed me day and night.
I had a playmate, we were best buds, but one day
something happened, he went away.
My playmate was nowhere around, where did he go?
The human came and got me, put me in his house
He said, "You'll be safe in here, outside is dangerous you know"
Your little friend died last night, and all because he was out.
You can stay with me, I'll protect you and you'll be mine.
But I was very unhappy, I wanted to go outside.
For outside may be dangerous, but at least I was free.
To roam the grass, play in the trees, at least out there
I could be me.
So I here I am in this strange place, no fresh air around
I feel my human betrayed me, but I don't want to bite him
I wish he'd put me down.
Now I'm on the floor I hate, I'll just run around
Until I can find somewhere away from him and
Never make a sound.
Maybe I'm safe in here, but unhappy as could be
I wish he'd put be outside again, dangerous, but free!
Mary E Lacey
2011

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 Reviews of "Feral Cat Lament"
Reviewed on November 15, 2017
Well, it is now 2017. My feral cat, Oliver, turned into Miss Oliver! She's still not the friendliest cat, but I can pet her when I'm giving out treats, and she has become best friends with my Rainbow! I don't she'd know what to do if she had to go outside now. I found after she grew a little, that she's a beautiful black Persian. Still a little skiddish, but not look when I first got her as a kitten!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 28, 2011
love is where you find it even for feral cats Mary -- this is an interesting story and you made it so easy for us to relate to the emotions -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed on September 18, 2011
MARY ... WELL DONE!

TIME WILL TELL ...

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 18, 2011
Mary,
Hopefully in time the cat will warm up to you and your husband. Right now the cat is confused and scared. I've never had a cat, I'm a dog person, but I commend you for taking him in and taking care of him and saving him for almost certain death. God bless you and your husband for your compassion.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 18, 2011
I must be extremely fortunate with the ferals I bring home, or perhaps it's our extremely nasty winter weather, but none of them seem to want to return to their lives out on the street. I even lead them to the backdoor periodically and open it to see their reaction, and they peek their heads out, look around, and run back inside as if to say: 'I had to live out there on my own, and I don't want to do it, ever again!'



My latest feral cat story is posted on A.D. now: 'The Furry Little Face In The Loading Dock' and I doubt very much that this cat would want to go back out there, ever again.

And Kudos to you and your hubby for always attempting to help them.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
I like the way you presented this from the kitten (cat)'s perspective, Mary. Nicely done. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on September 17, 2011
Interesting perspective, Mary; well done! There used to be a little feral kitty that hung around our apartments and eventually it got used to being around people. We would talk to it and feed it and/or give it water; it came to the point to where she learned to trust us and allowed for us to be able to pet her. She would then purr her face off, as we liked to say. We called her "Li'l Screamer!" because when she meowed, it sounded very demanding, insistent. She was absolutely adorable; we loved her! ("Li'l Screamer!" lives in the apartments behind ours; she now has a happy home. We see her in the window from time to time, still meowing her face off! LOL)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
Mary,
i like how you approach this
and the point of view...the world
a necessary compromise.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
Although I am not a "cat"person,I appreciate those who take them in and give them homes and love as they deserve.
fee

Reviewed by Swan Son
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
Interesting view of what is going on in the mind of a stray -- as he looses his freedom .... and gains safety. An interesting choice humans make in a somewhat different context. We reach for the sky and risk falling to the bottom of the pit .... some of us will never stop reaching .... Better to have tried and failed ... than never to have tried at all. Susan

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
I really enjoy your writing very much, Mary. The same thing happened to me a young cat not quite a kitten any more came through my opened arcadia door anf fell asleep under my bed. I tried to keep but he wanted to go free outside, eventually he stopped coming around. Cas can be like that. The Feline is very diverse besides curious. Great write as always.
GOD BLESS YOU, and Joe.
Tony

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
Smile! True of cats, true of humans! We don't like confinement, neither do cats. Still, for now it's best for kitty cat to stay put where it's safe until he's gained cat wisdom to outsmart the evils beyond the door.
An entertertaining write, Mary!

Hugs,
Lena

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
Aw, Mary, this really tugs at my heart. Poor little kitty is confused and unhappy, but I believe you and your husband will win him over with your love.

Connie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
As you said, it'll take a little time, but I have a feeling the "feral" will stay with him for a long time.


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