You made the bluebells sweeter
as we walked alone
on those starry Texas nights
believing that love or
whatever we shared could
somehow last forever
You made my heart beat deeper
my breath seem shallow
each time you spoke my name
with every sensory touch, history’s library of love
could easily be explained
You are the desire of my ages, my only joy
that one love each seeks to remain
and as I reminisce of our moments together,
every thought of you
makes even the beauty of the bluebells
fade to a distant memory
BEAUTIFUL...! THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS FANTASTIC... VIVID AND FULL OF THE GIFT OF LOVE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
real nice how the feelings and memories bcome lodged deeper, sweetened, I take it these would be the memories that would last, twine their way to those which cannot be fully labeled, ty al
Quite beautiful, Lori; stanza 2 certainly caught MY breath! KB
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
Lori, love can be sos sweet and the memory of it can too. Even after much time has passed. We need to always look to the brighter side and know that it can be sweet again in the here and the now. Hugs Bill
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
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A fine poem ...
Amor
Enjoyed much.....
You do romance so lovely...
this is wonderful soft and tender..
unique...floria
Love Tinka
real nice how the feelings and memories bcome lodged deeper, sweetened, I take it these would be the memories that would last, twine their way to those which cannot be fully labeled, ty al
This is beautiful , beautiful I really loved the essence
of this one Lori!
Allen