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I give You a Star
by Poets Soul → (All Poetry by Poets Soul)
Thursday, September 1, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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It's ok to let someone else hold your dreams.


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I give you a star-

Burning brightly,

Softly placing it

In the palm of your hand.

 

It is my dreams

That you hold there,

Close your hand

And hold it tight.

 

No more falling stars

That fade in time,

No more wishes

That will not come true .

 

This dream is real-

Born in my heart,

And it now it belongs

To only you.

 

And soon my love

When you release it,

Watch the magic

Of a dream coming true .


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 Reviews of "I give You a Star"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 2, 2022
Ouch! I only wish you had chosen some other vessel for your dreams. Stars are certainly a strong life force throughout the universe, but they are nothing but extremely hot gas and, in this case, not far away and twinkling through the atmosphere to be like forever in that same sky every night and not going away, just cool and inviting.

Otherwise, I find sharing your dreams with your love, wonderful.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 2, 2022
A brilliant symbolic image superbly executed: simple, understated, and yes beautiful. Among other things, a poem needs to be satisfying to the reader who is glad to have read the poem. This one truly is satisfying on many levels.

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on September 2, 2022
oh, suddenly i got the urge to witness the dream coming true while your love releases it. what a sight would that be. beautiful piece, big bro. i loved the line- no more falling stars that fade in time.

Reviewed on September 1, 2022
Very sweet and promising words in the declaration of your love. I enjoyed this.

Sandie


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