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THE DROOPING ROSE
by JANRI A GOGESHVILI → (All Poetry by JANRI A GOGESHVILI)
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THE DROOPING ROSE
NEEDS NO MAKE-UP…

You just die, – you just pass away,
And it’ll be all right, OK…
Your wife will read the Psalms
In a soft voice and prey.
She’ll weep a little and lament,
She’ll wear mourning dresses and fret,
And whisper to the dearest
Daughters and sons:
“My kids, your father
Has turned to dust…”
You just die, – you just depart,
And it’ll be OK… it’ll be all right.
The violets and the snowdrops
Will wipe out the winter,
The tiny bird will weave
Passion with twitter,
And the breeze
Will sing night’s tale to the leaves…
The widow will look in the mirror,
And take a pencil in her hand…
No make-up is needed, you know,
For a rose drooping her head…
She may notice your gaze, –
The zeal heavy with years,
She may see the sham
Mirrored in your eyes…
Then she’ll smile… and shed tears…
You’ll pity her and think
You’d better stay with her,
You’d better look
After the cornfield of your desire…
You’d better work with all your heart,
And reap what you have sown…
And let your beautiful wife
Be a violet to you… or a rose…

17.01.2003

Janri Gogeshvili

 

 


 

 


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Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Soft and precise at the same time.
I like the way the perspective slowly shifts
and also time can be perceived as a feeling
that slowly transforms.

Axilea

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
Translation, maybe, but very well translated-- reads beautifully in English. I would change the "prey" in line 4 with "pray" though. Otherwise, the mother sounds like a monster, rather than a mentor.

Interesting analogy-- behaving like a flower-- something you work hard for, and a harvest that lasts many meals over...

Good write. --Charlie


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