FIRST GRADE POETRY (poem) by m j . hollingshead on AuthorsDen

FIRST GRADE POETRY
by m j . hollingshead → (All Poetry by m j . hollingshead)
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Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is pink My eyes are chocolate brown My arms are freckled My hands are tan My heart is beating I’m crazy I never hurt my Guinea pig My friends are coming over I live in a trailer I hope I will get to baby sit I dream I get to see my cousin It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 1 Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is blond My eyes are hazel My arms are muscled My hands are germy My heart has a flappy slappy flap I’m a fine gentleman I never use drugs My friends are fun and so joyful I live in a wooden house I hope I will have a nice day I dream spooky dreams It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 3 Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is sandy brown My eyes are logging brown My arms are crazy My hands are large My heart is filled with love I’m a nice boy I never hurt my dog My friends are cute I live in a mobile home I hope I will get married I dream I’ll be a dad It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 4 Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is very long My eyes are not too brown My arms are silly My hands have lines My heart is filled with love I’m silly I never am mean to my Chihuahua My friends are nice to me I live in a big house I hope I will get to have a sister I dream I will be better It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 5 Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is short My eyes are blue My arms are skinny My hands are red My heart is filled with people I’m fun I never hurt my NeNa’s dog My friends are nice to me I live in a plastic trailer I hope I will go to I dream I will be in a DS It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 6 Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is long My eyes are blue My arms are funny My hands are small My heart is filled with smiles I’m cute I never hurt play with matches My friends are nice I live in a rock house I hope I will go to a museum I dream I will be in a Mom It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 7 Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is brown and blond My eyes are hazel green My arms are tan My hands are bumpy My heart is nice I’m a nice girl I never be mean to my parents My friends nice I live in a brick house I hope I will love our new baby brother or sister I dream I will be a movie star It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 8 Yes, that’s me Look and you’ll see My hair is brown My eyes are tree bark brown My arms are lumpy My hands are tan My heart is beating fast I’m cool I never hurt my pup My friends are funny I live in a house I hope I will ride my bike in the street I dream I will be an X men It’s all clear as can be THAT’S POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY ME STUDENT 9

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

I ENJOYED EVERY LINE...THANK YOU FOR TELLING ME ABOUT YOU. EVERY ONE OF YOU DID A VERY GOOD JOB.

LOVE AND BLESSINGS,

JOYCE - ATLANTA, GEORGIA

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 4, 2011

Keep up the good work you are on the way to becoming fine poets!

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Fine poetry from minds still very young. An inspiring teacher has challenged imaginations with marvelous results. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 1, 2011

Delightful creations! Keep up the good work. Best wishes,

Regis (BC, Canada)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

these are positively lovely!

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

My eyes are tree bark brown
My arms are funny
My heart is filled with smiles
I live in a rock house

Poets are born and then we "educate" the poetry out of them.

This is great. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Out of the mouths of babes.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

I love this

Reviewed by Paul Kyriazi

I enjoyed all the poetry. This time I really like Student number eight because of the words:
I never be mean to my parents
My friends nice
I live in a brick house

It's a great poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Marvelous poetry, indeed. And after another week of dealing with animal cruelty, it's very refreshing to hear that your students are nice to their pets.