I feel in love with your poem. It inspired me visually and was a perfect addition to my photography. Hope you don't mind. Please visit me here to view your poem in use http://sexyma1998.deviantart.com/art/Tears-of-Fall-105912326. Season Greetings and all the best in the new year. :)
Reviewed by Hooves Of Fire (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
This is sad, but I love the resolve to carry on that I see at the end. A very nice poem!
Hooves
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2004
This is so beautiful.
Love it.
Hope you are doing well?
Maybe. Unfortunately, our minds play tricks on us. It takes a long time to forget hurtful things. They seem to crop up in our memories more often than the good times. I like the flow of this poem.
Wow, such harsh words, but lovingly said, take care Val
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
wow Sher what an ending, yep guess tears can do that, I really liked the feel and sensitivy you included into this write too, and it was good to hear such truthful words spoken, thx al
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Hooves
Love it.
Hope you are doing well?
Very well expressed.
Gina
and wash away your tears
Let the wind blow
and chase away your fears
When the sun rises
it will warm your smile
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
~Nikki~