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This was my room
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When reading this poem.... use imagination. Ask what is old age? What happens to us? How distant do we get from our real lives when we age? This poem is a reference to a poem titled "Mr Bleaney".


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This was my room, as I
Look around me now,
Cannot remember all the details somehow,
Maybe I'm just too far away from it all.

Standing now by my window
Where I stood so many times
Before, I used to listen to the
Wind, hoping to hear a familiar voice.

My room now seems so empty
But I didn't need much
More, she always
Used to go on at me
About the gardening and so

I always just told her
Stories of my life, she
Listened but moaned
More about the way
That I am now, but

I did have happy
Days, I remember the Christmas
That I spent at my
Sister's, I remember the
hugs and all the love back then.

This room... was a room
Where I lived, I don't know
How special it was to me
I don't remember feeling it was my home

My life had surprises, that
I couldn't run from
My life had a plan I
Didn't make at all.

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 Reviews of "This was my room"
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
a thought provoking piece. And very good poetic expression. When I WAS young I never stopped to just sit and enjoy my nice young age. Of course I don't make that mistake anymore. Everyday I just sit a few moments and enjoy being where i'm at now. cheers G

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Exceptional write.....one of ure very best offerings....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
You're only as old as you feel. This made me feel forever young. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Tonya, many times we go through life without a plan. We call it winging it, so to speak. As I look back when I was a young man I had no idea I would be where I am today. Everything in my life happened so quickly that one might call it living spontaneously. As I age I do have a bit of direction but all in all live for the moment. I'll get off my soap box now. Your poem is a very good inspirational tool. Well done.

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Like the refererence to seeing the self as similar to the perceived adult was to the self in younger age. I have not read the other poem you speak of so I cannot comment more on that aspect. J.


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