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Kacie R Rahm

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The 2'nd Letter
by Kacie R Rahm → (All Poetry by Kacie R Rahm)
  
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Deceit
Lies
Your a jackass in my eyes.
As you talk to me with that voice I despise.
You cause pain
And despair
With that evil glare
And then you pretend to care.
You make the individuals feel powerless
and weak
All those people that you constantly critique
Heaven forbid they be unique.
You can't admit
That you play these poor souls
Your good looks and alter ego put you in control.
That's how you got all the hearts you broke and you stole.
Words take away your power
Which is what I'm doing in this note
You can disregard the first one I wrote
When it came to judgment day you were too slow.


Poem Artwork

Copyright ©2002 Kaci Rahm-------Well, this is a poem about my EX crush. I wrote him a note telling him all about how I liked him a-lot (and I did) and I gave it to him before I went to Japan. I came back from Japan and tried to keep things normal (we were like best friends before I gave it to him). Well instead he didn't speak to me at all! I tried to bring it up but he would just change the subject. I started to not like him. He was starting to talk behind my back like "I have her wrapped around my finger" I bitch slapped him at the next dance and sent him this note the next day.


The pic describes HOW I USED to feel;)

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 Reviews of "The 2'nd Letter"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
It is truly sad that some people can behave in this way. A powerfully emotive write, Kacie. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Lawrance Lux
Reviewed on July 21, 2002
Good expression, but Poetry is as much about form as expression. A realignment of phrases would improve the message.
lgl

Reviewed by Deanna Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2002
Powerful, impressive writing.

Reviewed on July 15, 2002
STRONG words, kaci! And a AWESOME poem, too! You GO, girl!! love, karen lynn.

Reviewed by EMILY (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2002
WOW! This is a very good poem, right to the core and straight to the point.


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