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A Virgin Unveiled
by Nia Rose → (All Poetry by Nia Rose)
  
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If I give,
and he receives
What if my life
he leaves?

Oh, to have loved wrong,
then have the treasure lost.
What a price to pay
a twenty five year cost.

A gift from me
for his delight.
What if its quality
is not of his sight?

Once the veil is lifted,
and the prize revealed
Will my essence still be gifted
after the years it was concealed?

If I do give,
and his presence is lost
How then do I live
after the gift was tossed?





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 Reviews of "A Virgin Unveiled"
Reviewed by noxolo marcia (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2010
must say dats wonderful but never live with

(what if) for life won;t de fun live with ther moment

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on August 16, 2003
Very powerful piece, Nia. :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2003
The best way to get over one, is to find another. [and you will never make that mistake again] smiles...well done.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2003
Nicely written well done...now away with all those reminders as Allain has said! :O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2003
There are many of us who would not abuse.
Well written piece.
Kudos!


tony:)

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Well get rid of everything that reminds you of him. The first step is wanting.
Other than that you have a well written poem here.
Cheers
Allain


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