your love songs echoe through me
Seduced in after thoughts
of our pavonian swan songs,
I offer to you this fragrant perfume
of lilac bouquets-
…as we share our climactic love songs
while we dance together in unisons
upon the naked grassy meadows
melding the scent of our infusive musk
plucking forget-me-nots in hemp hammocks
where our desirous pleasures blanket us
in shrouding sensualities releasing intimacy
into sumittal deliverance
through cessations of our lover's destiny
gloaming through the opaline jewels of passion
as we reach paragons unveiling iridial softness;
I whisper my heart to your soul…
(Written: July 12th, 2010 5:22 a/m)
© Poetess Victoria L. McColley
Web Site: Poetry
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|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Vickie, I am in agreement with Felix. "I whisper my heart to your soul" is a beautiful line. It carries an extra special romantic significance. "Where our desirous pleasures blanket us" is tepid and suggestive. It lures me in. May peace love and love be with you always my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|You do whisper so softly my dear Vickie. A crystal jewel with naturally sharp beveled edges, not defining the boundaries, but taking us over its ledges, and the avenue that shows us another window of her beauty.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|wow..."I whisper my heart to your soul" love this line.