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It's Obvious
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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It is sort of obvious isn't it?

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I know that I’m right

You know that I’m wrong

I think that I’m weak

You think that I’m strong

 

You speak from your heart

I speak from my mind

I say love’s pointless

You say love’s blind

 

You have emotion

I have opinion

We each have humility

We each have dominion

 

I have no question

You have a reply

I often chuckle

You often sigh

 

Together there’s music

A constant refrain

I’m afraid it is obvious

That someone’s insane

 

 

 

Copyright 2011 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "It's Obvious"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 6, 2011
I think it's good to be a little crazy and it's great to recognize it and to enjoy it and the music that it creates. Thanks, Patrick. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 30, 2011
As long as there's music, it'll be OK!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 29, 2011
Yes, we are all insane!
Tomato, tomahto, Eether, either, Neether, neither
I love that song!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 29, 2011
Giggle....hear ya loud and clear! Sometimes a little insanity keeps us going....you've described the perfect relationship...giggle


Anna

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on November 28, 2011
Sounds to me like you two can't agree on anything. Must be love. Either that or 20 years of marriage.

Good one Patrick. Dick

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on November 28, 2011
Obviously astute observations!
*Patrick*
Thank You for the poem!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on November 28, 2011
Hmmm? Sounds like marriage to me.
Mark

Reviewed on November 28, 2011
so good! Morgan

Reviewed on November 28, 2011
It's obvious, you are confused, or maybe it's simply me. Hugs!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 28, 2011
...and it ain't me, so it must be you know who...;-)e

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 28, 2011
This is great, Patrick. Well done.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 28, 2011
Beneath this wit
lies astute evaluation
and more truth than most
would like to admit

good one, Patrick

John


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