The Wish [Sonnetina Uno] (poem) by Carmen Ruggero on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 28, 2006

You did the form justice my friend. Excellent work, beautiful composition. Thanks for your recent comments. It is good to see your work again.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

This is superb..wish I could write sonnets..however I dislike rules so I'll never write one...lol!!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 10, 2006

I absolutely love this sonnet, Carmen. I am moved by the sentiments expressed throughout the poem for I can completely relate to them and the meaning therein. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Faith and devotion fill the lines of this poem with exceptional beauty. THE WISH shines a light of joy and grace through the reader's heart.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 20, 2006

nicely done!! please check out
Haiku ..... 4th grade boys, the kids are so thrilled they are on the internet!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Insightful write!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

A wish well thought, Carmen...a lovely prayer.

Gina

Reviewed by Jill Carpenter (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2006

This is so nice. I'm glad I stopped by and found this gem. Thank you for sharing it, it was enjoyed. J

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on February 16, 2006

A wonderfully inspired piece Carmen.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 15, 2006

This is so lovely, Carmen; wistful and fluid! Straight from the heart and soul. Perfect picture.
Peace and Blessings,
CArolyn

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

a most inspired meaning within this polished poem ...

Reviewed by Helga Ross

Reviewed on February 11, 2006

Carmen, this is wonderful!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 11, 2006

Wonderful piece that fits the form and satisfies the content for the reader. Good job, Carmen. I'm glad I stopped by.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 10, 2006

Outstanding, Carmen. You did a great job with the form: the meaning inspires, and the poem flows. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 10, 2006

Great offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 10, 2006

Sonnetina Uno Perfecto/a?? Both in form and in concept - and the picture is divine... what a perfect little honey... I may just give this a whirl, Carmen, thank you... LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 10, 2006

A marvelous poetic wish, Carmen.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Quintessentially Carmen Ruggero. Which is to say, remarkable.
Which is to say it inadequately. Love the poem, love the writer.
A l w a y s, 'Pea'

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Beautifully penned, Carmen; I haven't tried this form. Love the emotion and imagery you paint in your lines. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Art flows on to meet wisdom, and an outstanding compostion is fully
delivered through the lines of "The Wish [Sonnetina Uno]".

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

I'm keeping this one! What a gift! This is what I call perfection Carmen!The sryle, meter and mostly the sentiments;-) Outstanding!

Love,
Eileen^

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Fabulous. Gotta love it, and I do. This is good stuff.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

This is something to keep for nostalic memories a beautiful poem of a mothers heartfelt wishes for their child to grow strong and guarded by God. Beautiful work Carmen!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

When your child or children stay as close as possible to God, their futures are guaranteed, and their safety and personal happiness assured !
This is an exquisite and unusual sonnet derived straight from your honest heart Carmen !
And that Classic picture is so endearing !
Peter