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Hear My Voice
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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Music”I will always love you”

“Hear My Voice” Oh hear my voice As I walk these pathless routes That leads me to nowhere I love you… but can never be yours Without saying a word Just hear my voice upon the breeze As I walk my beach alone I love you… but can never be yours Without singing a song Oh darling hear my voice Echoing in mountains high I do love you… but can never be yours Without a tear See how my own teardrops fall for you As I write you this Saying over and over again I love you… but can never be yours my love Oh hear my voice calling to you That’s the only choice you have Till the next morning appears My heartaches the only witness Of the pain held within Because I do love you You are in my heart forever And beneath my chest I will keep my love for you But yours my love I can never be Again Copyright ©2004 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

a heart-rending sad write, but so beartufully done, Carole

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Your use of repetition here would certainly leave a lover bereft and immeasurably forlorn with the understanding that he could never have the one he loved, Tinks.

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle

Tinka,

Your ability to express such heartfelt emotion is stunning! A beautiful, but sad expression of longing for love. Thank you for sharing your talent. Love the picture, also!

Cynthia

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 11, 2004

a sad soft and wonderful write
excellent

William .....peace & Love

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Beautifully evocative. Affecting!! And the illustration
is gorgeous. Thank you for posting this, Tinka.
For being y o u ! 'Fiss' <3

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

A beautifully mastered and extremely well-versed, exceptionally crafted poem - marvelous ... you are a poetess supreme!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by A PAX

Things change, nothing is engraved in stone......as long as we are alive there is always a second chance, or third, or ummmm
well
you know what i mean lol

hey you make your own decisions in life....have to make yourself happy,
pax A

Reviewed by Linda Roman

sad and lovely at the same time...

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

well I guess these are sentiments murmered by many tink, well scripted, Al

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

The poem echoes the sentiment expressed in the song.

Reviewed by George Jackson

This one hit real close to home for me, the secret places of my heart, where I wait patiently for her to finally look my way. A keeper, this one. Excellent, Tinka.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

A sad love poem. Keep the faith.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

super sad poem Tinka!I hope your mood will be uplifted and you can rejoice in the remembered Birth of a savior who loves you!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Bitter bitter sweet and extremely sad write, Tinka.

Hope everything is OK.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Sometimes abandoning a sinking ship is the only way to get to safety. It seems that you have reached that point, Tinka. A very sad and lonely write.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

heartfelt and sad, tinks; well done as always!

thank you for your review on my new story; much appreciated, friend!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :)

Without singing a song