Marriage - Commitments (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 14, 2005

A powerful and sad poem...excellent write, I know the feelings expressed all too well.

Paul:-}

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on January 11, 2005

If you know you did everything humanly possible - then there is nothing else to do. God Bless, Dave

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on January 8, 2005

ohhhhhhh
poor baby
now I understand
be true to your heart T!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on January 7, 2005

yes ma'am...you captured it all, right here. there's not much more to say about that sacred institution, now is there...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

A powerful write Tinka, very heart touching. I agree with Jude, nightmares are not to be indulged in.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

I have to agree with Robert, when one dream ends.....
it is time to have a new dream...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

sometimes we have to accept the dream is over ...

sad poem, Tiinka ...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Painful and poignant, Tink. Eileen has the right word for you, VIBRANT

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

people shouldn't marry oo young. even when old and mature it's a struggle to survive positively each and every day. some piece work tink. l&p G

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Excellent and very painful acrostic Tinka, so very sad,

Reindeer

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

So sad a write.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Tinka,

Fabuolus art and a divine acrostic - superbly crafted and written ... exceptional!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

As always a wonderful acrostic from you...Ed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

My heart is not as cold as you can see

May it always continue to be warm, Tinka.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Wow! Id say it's time to make new plans Tinka! You are a strong vibrant lady and I know you'll overcome this! All the best to you!
Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Some painful truths in these verses, Tinka. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

You see it is the failure to commit that breaks the hearts. A well done poem written to an old song from one that knew it well.