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Punch Bowl
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Twilight View, Punchbowl Lake, Alaska


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Even if your dance card is full you must identify with this in a metaphorical sense.



~*~
Punch Bowl Mistress

Punch bowl mistress, ease of ladled smiles
Heart now standing open waiting in the aisles
Flowered corsaged lady, where did your lover go
Why are you alone tonight, watching others flow
Take out that open dance card, find a way to start
Never lose your patience dance on out for hearts
Romeo is bleeding, he's scared and must pretend
He hurts too much to let go, much less to just begin
His absence is a hint now to just let him leave
He tries but he's impatient while you still believe
He screams from you this favor he never asked for proof
He spoke of distant pleasures ,then you had to goof
This mistress of the punch bowl, educated heart
Clouded eyes of blue now, much bluer in the heart

© 2007 Susan Kathryn de Vegter


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 Reviews of "Punch Bowl"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
The colors of love gone wrong.

Ron

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Another beautiful write Susan
thanks for sharing this wonderful piece
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
I identify with this, I identify with you. So beautiful, Love Pierre.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
This is just beutiful,, read it 3 times,,,
Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Take out that open dance card, find a way to start
Never lose your patience dance on out for hearts

A wonderful way to go!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
As always, wonderfully written.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
awesome metaphor

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
I love it, gorgeous pic too!I surely do relate,sis,I need a new dance card;-)

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Always touching~Ted

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
a deeply beautiful write-there is much to be discovered here

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
A mistress is a mistress is a mistress. Hard to take and it kills the heart of love.

Kathy

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Metaphorically, my a**, I identify with it because you took the mistress of the punch bowl and wrote her into my heart, hard not to identify . . . Ya did it again, hon . . .


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