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Love's Jaquzzi
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
  
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All seriousness aside...it's time forlevity.
~SKR~


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Love's Jaquzzi

Dayum I'm lathargic
Feel'n just a lil woozey
Love's a drag'n jez a bit
So I'm turn'n on love's Jaquzzi
Jump'n into love jez now
Spalsh'n all around
Sing'n jez the way love sings
Top of lungs
Loud n proud
Jaquzzi bubbles to my head
Dance'n with this love
Buried up to lips in foam
Push that song...n' shove
"Slip away I need ya so...
Love Oh love how sweet it is"...
Stay with me and never go
Dance'n lips into his
Take a breath with me honey
Lungs a fire from sip'n up
Hold me fast my soft lil bunny
Pressing passions.... get enough
"Wait'n for the midnight hour...
"No one else around"
All in all hearts and flowers
Only heatbeats make a sound
Crazy boosters shooting stars
Making hearts all woozey
Love and me and jez my man
In bubble'n love's jaquizzi


Susan K. Rowse
©Copyright 2/2003

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 Reviews of "Love's Jaquzzi"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
Susan...LOL...very wonderfully written....smoooth and cute...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
very cute of a romantic nature love the southern tone to it very funny LOL great job and adored the picture sincerly your frozen friend

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
great poem and a very cute pic

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
There are many good lines in this,very original.

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on February 18, 2003
Very cute...
And well done...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 17, 2003
cute, very cute,
wonderful write

William

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on February 17, 2003
lol, Great write Susan!
Jack


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