Wonderful picture with fracture patterns. It always thrills me that glacier ice, despite mostly reacting as a fluid, can break and fissure like rock. Fascinating poetry, too. Franz

Like vodka talking to an ice cube.

"Calving" is an interesting idea in this context.
I have gone all environmental myself, doing a lot of greenpeace gigs throughout the summer.
I thought the style you used here was very appropriate, not exactly heavy, but pregnant with meaning.
love
Ian

You pen some very interesting pieces, Sara.

Great graphic!

This new style from you is chilling.

Whoa. Intense, all right. And I read a painful depth here. Good work, thank you.

very intense pic & poem ... definitely has a chilling affect ...

Hi Sara,

Glad to see you back girl...brrrr....your picture reminds me of the fall I took all splashy and severe. No more downs okay...just smiles!!

Your poem speaks a thousand words.....hope you okay friend!!

Love Tinka

I knew from the title that it had to have something to do with an iceberg. Nice write.

ok.....this is a very personal poem......I know it means SOMETHING intense.....and was written for a specific reason....so to try to comment and or interpert it.....I bet I will be a zillion miles off the mark.....but the title Sara!!! LOL....when I saw it......I had to investigate!!! Because the "calving" reference is two fold.....and can mean a birth or a seperation.......and darn you are making me work here!! ok ok.........
And the frozen part at the end........meaning lost in the past....? You know what.......this is so so deep!

Sara.....this says tons, without shouting it!!! And bravo for you! Because writing this way is an art.
I love the veiled....thats only revealed for those that lift.

ty poet........pax A

Beautiful picture and nice write.