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Even When I Can't
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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Sometimes, I like to think of the times when you
come home. A long trip, traveling, working
doing your thing; your daily routine of providing.
I can see you soak in a hot steamy tub.
Lying back, your muscles ache,
your mind is on fire, griped in its endless cycle of thought.
I値l sit on the side, sharing a little of your space.
I値l serve you whiskey, in a rocks glass;
three fingers deep, and neat.
I値l just look at you, and let you sparkle in the misty light.
You値l tell me about the dumb shit you had to overcome.
You値l tell me about all the fantastic shit that worked just right.
You値l tell me about the moments when only if a certain action
would have occurred, leading to the exact right reaction.
And then you値l layout your dreams, your plans for a tomorrow.
Things deeply set into broad future, of a day when all actions
will be equal to all reactions.
And I値l laugh when the telling is funny.
And I値l encourage when you need more hope.
But most of all, I値l just love you.
I値l always love you, even when I can稚.

 


 

Copyright ゥ 2004 Sara Coslett
 
 


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 Reviews of "Even When I Can't"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
the power of an excellent poem is its ability to capture a moment and see throught it, as you have so honestly done ...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Sara....such a wonderful write...Loved the way u ended this ....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Oooh hot stuff Sara.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
I値l always love you, even when I can稚.

Marvelous thoughts and poem, Sara; about love as it should be.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
That is so heartfelt......but love is like that.......
Cupid got you good Sara.........:)
pax A

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
Delightful read Sara!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
I am so glad to hear that some shit does go right as in this poem. You can channel me anytime, we live in parallel universes anyway.

Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
A day in the life of super girl with her man. Excelllent poetry. What a sweet welcoming home. I envy him.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
Georgous poem. Looking at the pic' I'd forget the whiskey...

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
I love it. Especially the ending.


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