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Insecurity
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It seemed like a good idea to

Need you. Then I forgot,

Silence is the master and the key. And

Equilibrium is a precarious thing

Consumed in the fire of

Ugliness and self-hate that

Resides within pieces of melting

Ice, in an ocean of dreams

Thrown haphazardly among

Yesterdays discarded ashes from the pyre.

 

 

Copyright © 2008 Sara Coslett

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Insecurity"
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Silence is the master and the key. And equilibrium is a precarious thing
consumed in the fire....................A wise thing never to be forgotten once we have learned this. You have an old soul kindred spirit! Tis why you are so wise...............namaste dan

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 6, 2008
Crushed dreams. excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 23, 2008
Powerful and intense Sara...strong is the image you have created with this one, each line sizzling.
Fee

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 23, 2008

How to say anything that might add to high quality, here?
After reading it three times, I accept it, and am thankful that it was said. ... A rare bit of thinking and writing, indeed. - Bill


Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
equilibrium IS a precarious thing...always wobbling to and fro...never quite finding its real home...
A thought provoking write & an impressive acrostic!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
Most impressive acrostic, Sara. Powerful "in your face" expressive verses that leave the reader wanting (no, needing) to read again. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
This is really tight, not a single unnecessary word, always a good thing, and one of the best acrostics, too. Excellent.

Reviewed on September 22, 2008
Sara,

STUNNING accrostic, imagery leaves the reader reeling, searching for balance: wow. Extremely well penned, this one packs quite a lot into ten lines!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
Let the memories that bind you blaze! And then be gone forever, so you can find a new equilibrium. Well, here's to hoping, anyways... --Charlie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
Well-said, Sara!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
Sara, you delve deep here to find meaning and truth in essential things, especially happiness and fulfillment.
John


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