AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Frank Ryan, iMary Lynn Plaisance, iLaura Cavanaugh, iChristina Neely, iJoy Pedersen, iAlexander Shaumyan, iRaven West, iShirley Francis-Salley, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iDonald Beaulieu, i

  Home > Relationships > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Sara Coslett

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 683 Titles
· 6,777 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2002

Sara Coslett, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



it's over
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork

from the moment we met

i was ready to give you my life

as you became my world

nothing else mattered

i had no other cares

because i loved you so frighteningly much.

because i loved the way you made me feel my thoughts.

because i wanted to make you happy for making me feel good.

because i wanted to see you smile when you woke in the morning

because i wanted to share in your excitement upon every new discovery

because i wanted to feel your sigh of relief at the end of a hard day

and again when you laid your head down in the evening.

because i wanted to take away your pain at night

and then wipe away your soul full tears.

that's how much i cared for you.

that's the love that you lost

that was my love to you

and now it is rubbish

left in a dumpster

at the 7-11

of life

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "it's over"
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Loved this, especially the 7/11 of life. I've been stranded there more than once

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
oh man..This one got to me, Wish he knew what he lost...to damn bad, he doesn't deserve you,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Nice of him to leave it there, now you can just run in and find another one. Sure is a shame the way some people have no respect for what we give to them.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
One of ure best write...excellent!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Dear Sara you are a real Super Girl...and you are NOT alone in this mess..believe me....time will heal those wounds and we will stand taller than ever....see this as a education and not a loss.....
Great heartwrenching write....please read my "corner of my skull"...
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Nicely done seems so trite with this one, but dayam...it is nicely done.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Only a fool would trade in that kind of love! You deserve better! Great emotions and wonder expression and wait for James to finish rumaging through the dumpster!

Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Emotional and sad...Well writen!
Allen

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Dear Super Girl, Everytime I write that I expect a caped crusader. I think your poem was great, and daring.


tony

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
With talent like yours men would feel honored to know you stay true to your self great writer

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
3-28-03

It's Over Only My Dead Body,i.e. Poem, Fantasy Or Not, Never Do Not Look Back Unless You Have Been Had__

It's A Good Write,Let It All Hang Out Without a Doubt!

Accept Not Believe__Your Just Rewards Are Not Of Or In This Physical World!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
This is one WOW of a write...
Absolutely took me captive!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
This is fantastic! One of your best SG!

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Such sadness in this poem.
I love James' comment he has it so right.
Wonderful poem

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Well Sara,
isn't it a good thing that I rummage through dumpsters. One man's garbage is another man's treasure. Find the man who knows what he's got when he has it.
-J

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooooo
Supergirl :(.. This is so emotional....
Hugs Peg


New Poetry by Sara Coslett
Popular Poetry (Relationships)
  1.  If my Dad knew
  2.  Christian Friendship
  3.  Budding Relationships
  4.  Me and You
  5.  Keep Me Safe
  6.  Good-bye
  7.  Mind Fog
  8.  SURROUNDED
  9.  Your Fascist Heart!
  10.  Between Crescent Moons
  11.  The meaning of love
  12.  Life As I Now Know It
  13.  When A Man Loves A Woman
  14.  Ode To My Cat Woman
  15.  Reunion of Friends
  16.  Serenity
  17.  Along the Wayside
  18.  A Simple Hug
  19.  With You … Without You
  20.  When Dreams Come True
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

The World of the Narcissist by Sam Vaknin

A book-length psychodynamic study of pathological narcissism, relationships with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder, using a new vocabulary.  
Member BookAds

Toxic Relationships - Abuse and its Aftermath by Sam Vaknin

How to identify abuse, cope with it, survive it, and deal with your abuser.  
Member BookAds

Remnants, Romance and Renewal by Cynth'ya Reed

An easy to read, mind-stirring collection about the realm of relationships, poetically speaking.  
Member BookAds