Darkness (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 24, 2003

Great title to a great image of words. As the dark falls, so shall our love.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

You have expressed well those moments between suns suttle glow and darkness... the silent longing we often feel. Kudos, dear lady.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

This one brought tears to my eyes...I can feel the pain, but the picture and the poem allowed beauty to shine through the pain. Best wishes to you! ~Z~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Excellent!!!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Sad, but excellent writing..
Beautiful picture.....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

but what a beautiful haze it leaves...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Hi Super Girl:

You have turned a sad situation into a beautiful write, just as beautiful as the picture. Very creative indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

I sense a part of you in this poem.
I liked poetry that can bring a tear.
"The sun has vanished now.
Lost below the horizon.
And you, like the light are gone? take care.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

This is a superb poem and photo. Just thought you should know that my post last week,"To A Dead Scottish Poets Society" was deleted with no explanation, or whatever. perhaps I should put it in the blog, hadn't thought of that;-)Hope you read it there.

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

this is lovely, water is the life giver... great write

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Whomever this lucky person is to have your love, is indeed very lucky. I just hope you find the happiness you heart desires. A great written piece of poetry, Sara.

tony:)

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Love your lines: "I dream of whaot could have been, / Drawing from what was" and at the end with the light and sun. Beautiful imagery and those great lines, J.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Sara, Let me first say, it's nice to meet you. And yes,,I believe we may have lots of things in common.
I liked this write and the photo are beautiful..Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

I know you miss my mouth, huh- did that come out right?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Most beautiful Picture Sara...You are so blessed to have that right there with you...its a gift from God Sara!!
My heart bleeds with yours....you are not alone...I am still alone with you my on this one Okay!!

Love Tinka