Just a little offering from my sweet 10 year old Daughter Evie, who handed me this tonight...She put this together at school today, hmmm perhaps it's genetic lol.
In any case, I'm a proud Mom!!
The Mat Sat On The Cat
"Take dat you dirty mat sittin cat!" "I aint no fat cat habitat Why you bin sittin since you were a kittin you know dat's true .. And because of you I got de treatment at de laundromat!"
"Well, I aint takin no more of dat I'm squashing you flat CAT and DATS DAT!!"
'Evie' Copyright 2006
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Well, I am totally buzzing, to be able to present my Daughter like this, with work that is so just original of her own, and giving her the opportunity to excel in her talent! To me that is the greatest gift a parent can give their children.
I am hoping in the future as she gains momentum, we can have a site of her own WOOHOO.
Thanks for all the review my dear friends, Evie is just so thrilled, this has given her heaps of confidence, ONYA MATES
Love Ch'erie, Proud Mom, And her bro below thinks so too, and her Dad hehe.
Reviewed by ~~Ch'erie de Perrott~~
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
I love this Evie!.......Im proud to be your brother!.....Keep up the work and soon you will be a genius!...^_^
HAHAHAHA 10 yrs old? Wow! She's already surpassing her mom;-)(jk);-)
This realy is fantastic! It could have been written by any aged poet! Congrats to you Evie, keep that pen flowing!
No cats here, only a big, hairy, stinky dog that sleeps most times on my, er, uh his bed...Following in mommy's footsteps can't be all that bad, as long as you do so with the humor you have shown here...ed & rufuz (woof)
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Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I am hoping in the future as she gains momentum, we can have a site of her own WOOHOO.
Thanks for all the review my dear friends, Evie is just so thrilled, this has given her heaps of confidence, ONYA MATES
Love Ch'erie, Proud Mom, And her bro below thinks so too, and her Dad hehe.
susan
This realy is fantastic! It could have been written by any aged poet! Congrats to you Evie, keep that pen flowing!
Eileen
Lena
This is precious. I can see where Evie got her delicious sense of humor from, her Mum! BRAVA to the both of you!
Darn mat settin cat. :)
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Connie
Now tell me about this repressed anger..lolo
The hide it and search for it again and the play goes on for many hours!! If the one gives up the next one takes over.....lol!!
The mat in my house id righ in front og the fridge!!
Love & Hugs Auntie Tinka (From South Africa}