Yellow Underbelly (poem) by Ch'erie de Perrot on AuthorsDen

Yellow Underbelly
by Ch'erie de Perrot → (All Poetry by Ch'erie de Perrot)
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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Adapted from a Disgusting situation that arose tween two nations and beyond, yet glorified on national T.V.

Yellow Underbelly Devoid of any purposeful use than to reek havoc and abuse tween two pastures tightly woven as the hoof has become cloven Comes the Underbelly of society Yellow, putrid in it's entirety what good can ever come of this other than an evil Hiss Powder keg tongue tipped Halo of the infamous slipped predator to the unwise slithers in it's blood disguise Pregnant, ravenous for the kill satisfaction guaranteed irrespective of the ill taste left in the mouths of the young abandoned, left to wallow in dung Merciless backstabbing creature crossed, is neither mentor or teacher prey disappearing forever as though they existed never Like all that move on the Belly it will eat dust as the evergrowing tally piles as garbage in it's wake Oh Ruthless Underbelly Snake! Ch'erie de Perrot Copyright 7/03/09 CAL Copyright Australia Ltd All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on March 9, 2009

Excellent poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by David Delaney

Reviewed on March 8, 2009

This is great Ch'erie, why do humans have to hurt their own, I dream of world wide peace & free of poverty, but I know unfortunately I wont see this in my lifetime. Wonderful, powerful writing mate.

Dave.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on March 7, 2009

Very creative lines in this message. Well done:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

A powerful message that is most apt and timely. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Great writing,enjoyed very much stay safe and well sweet lady...Hugssss

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

You sure these people that push that powder have yellow underbellies or a yellow stripe down their backs signifying cowardice...maybe they have both...? Ed

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Well said. There is no accounting for the toll taken in lives and relationships ruined, not to mention the crime.

Walt

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Chezza!!!

Nice seeing you again - you pen a powerful condemnation of man's inhumanities against their own, their Nation - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

It is sad that in this day and age not only men but nations can be so uncivilized. Great write with strong emotions.

Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Great message here my friend.