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Serenity and Peace in the Throes of Passion
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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Two of my fantasies wrapped up in one.

Serenity and Peace in the Thoes of Passion Huge mansion on the hill Long straight driveway lined Bentleys, Rolls, Ferraris, and Maybachs Dealing men, women, countries, and banks. Oilmen spilling black semen Bankers with mouths wide open Powerful presidents limp and watching Ms Alaska whores her beautiful body to the camera. The key was in the door That opened to the hidden room Party of the world grew hot and wild Cash, power, and orgies deeply entwined. And then… Beautifully filled with passion By graceful steps Serenity moved Across the lawn to the tall front door In all her elegance and beauty moved inside. Her presence in the midst of din Stifled gasps out of dark corners Every man frantically tried to do her She waved them all away with her kindness. Women she called on Dancing with each and every one She found her perfectly disguised lover Eyes locked, fingers playfully touching her body Mayhem slowly mellowed As her hand turned rusted the key Door swung open, she slipped inside With Peace, her lover, hearts in rhythm beating. Serenity and Peace on the hidden bed Sensually deep in love, mansion stilled Softly they touched, fiery tongues probing Arching and aching, wet pleasure spots meeting Higher and higher they lifted Each other into moaning clouds The band silent, the party stopped Watching the keyhole’s brilliant white glow. Cash, power, and orgies expiring No longer hold control or meaning Hearts smolder warmly, spirits interwoven Oilmen, bankers, the powerful receive their sight. Economies soar, nations thrive Guests find in each other eternal Love Driveway filled, orphans, hungry, and widows Singing Peace and Serenity’s song of ecstatic love. Mortgages paid in full Dependence on oil dissolves All national borders fade into universal love Peace and Serenity in the throes of passion reign. 2010 © Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on August 11, 2010

Very well done indeed

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2010

Man, you would truly make God angry at you for having such a long list, but He would probably say, after such a good read: Hey, sense you wrote this all so well ... OK! Granted! This is very interesting and causes me to constantly track my thoughts as I read. Very well, written, and equally well received. Thanks Dayvid.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

a very unusual and thoughtful pen. well done.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 13, 2010

they are female too...
yes indeed they are...
this is a wonderful creative expressions Dayvid
and if you don't mind
I am stuck on this:
"Serenity and Peace on the hidden bed

Sensually deep in love, mansion stilled

Softly they touched, fiery tongues probing

Arching and aching, wet pleasure spots meeting"

Love Songs Erupting...
Vickie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on July 12, 2010

Love the metaphor!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Brilliant use of metaphor throughout! An extraordinary, contemporary, and timely piece! Super fine write! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 11, 2010

NEVER QUITE HAD IT DEPICTED IN THIS WAY...BUT TRULY THIS IS WHAT THE WORLD DOES NEED, TRULY WHAT THE WORLD DOES NOT HAVE...'HIS' PEACE AND 'HIS' SERENITY...COMING TOGETHER(WHICH CAN ONLY HAPPEN WHEN 'HE' IS ACKNOWLEDGED) AND RESOLUTELY SOLVING EVERY ONE OF THE WORLDS PROBLEMS. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,

JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

That's quite a fantasy you have there but I'm not holding my breath waiting the oilmen and bankers and the powerful to see the light. Patrick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 10, 2010

A wise man's vision!
This is faultless Dayvid ~ Pour me some more wine?
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Andy Turner

The last 4 or 3 stanzas are outstanding as that is how life needs to be.
Rather than the creed of greed.
To see all borders fall has to come somewhen.
As a kid I'd look at the moon when astronauts were on it and ask dad why can they go anywhere on the moon yet we have to stay in one part of the earth. May be BP = Broken Pipes will move us forward. We can but hope.

TY

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

I loved the line about Ms.Alaska. I disagree with her on just about everything but she is very hot!! This writing Dayvid was much more than about Sarah. It was extremely well crafted and easy to read.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY