Eating Your Words (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

Well written Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

(((lady a)))

YESSSSSSSSS! i bite off more than i can chew...when i'm not throwing up drivel LOL

thanks for a profound lesson contained in a delightful write

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

OOOOH YEEEEESSS!!!! This is an absolutely yummy write and has me wincing and guffawing in equal measures - NOT at your searing skill, here, Anita, but in the knowledge that I only too often wield a sword that is WAY too big for me!! Just wish I wasn't so wordy, but y'all must know by now that I somehow just can't help meself!! Like a silk handkerchief from a magician's top pocket, the damn thing just won't go back in once you've started to pull it out...EXCELLENT!! Just luvin ya work, Babe and many thanks for your very kind message this morning....Mwah, Hun Kate xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Those errant words are sometimes as tough as shoe leather.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

You are very wise Anita..you write ever so well too ;)
Wonderful rhyme and meter.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Between the brain, and the pie hole
Quakey thoughts get past patrol

Excellent!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Lady A,

Much truth in this. No one wants to hear when they're wrong. Love the rhyme and flow of your poem. That picture was outstanding, glad I didn't make a mistake near that big fella. (lol)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

LOVE IT Lady A~
and pic is perfection....
"Once these words are liberated
To feast on them is complicated
Especially when they're half baked
Its rough to digest our mistakes!!!!"

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

Last line is so true....
A great dino picture...looks like my kids when their hungry..
Have a great night Lady A......

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

Anita, Superb write! Agree totally! Love the dino;-)

ACHTUNG!ASHFAURT! Bet you'd never use Ashfaurt for a name;-)hehehe
thanks for the story really enjoyed and the info!That must have been
a great experience (gutter girl tramps through Europe;-)only kidding!

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

Bravo...This was excellently said, Anita!
So wonderfully written!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

bullseye on this one, Lady A...you are so right...

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

you said it lady