Don't Drop By Uninvited! (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

This is great. I loved this.
You're something special Lady.

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

I love surprises!!

Love Tinka!!

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

Lady A, The magic is in your mind and pen. You are an excellent writer and this poem backs that statement. The lesson you teach is excellent. I will always remember not to drop by without proper notice. (lol) An awesome write with perfect flow.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

OH YES!!!!!!! Woe betide those who dare disturb the "polishing up of the wooden leg and glass eyeball night" and who turn up when your wig's in foils and you've cucumber on your eyelids and hair remover on your upper lip!!! And especially if you forget to put your teeth in when you answer the door! Sassy, witty, clever, smart.... all the things we've come to expect and love from you, Anita. Clueless??!!! I don't think so!!! Any chance of a serial here, like Madame and her Ghost?! You'd have us all gagging..... LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

Always call a head ? what?

Great discriptions, after being bewithched by the pic.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

I am announcing my arrival! :-) Great write! BTW had a chance to catch up with your bio and loved your statement about the arts :-) and the poem underneath it.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

I found this to be very humorous yet well done. Thank you!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Excellent, Lady A! Really enjoyed this.

And I won't be dropping by, unannounced, any time soon.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Lady A,

What incredible imagination, magical yet perhaps a message therein lies:

The magician smeared the face, and traced a different path
Once again the face emerged, with indignated wrath

don't play with life, you cannot not change what has been done !

Excellent write

Elga

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

This is excellent. Love every line.

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

Hey there Lady A - This is a Lot of Fun, and a little aresting.
Great imagination and rythm. Vicky

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

Lady A...this is an excellent poem...full of magic...I really enjoyed the ending...you really know how to reel us into the poem...awesome poem...thoroughly enjoyed...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

MAGNIFICENT write!

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

Lady A this is a beautiful imaginative bit of poetry as only a woman could write it�~DarkBard~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

Anita, a Phenemonal piece of work!Truly astonishing!
Your talent is awesome!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

(((lady a)))

simply magical! i adored this one

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

a fascinating fantasy
Full of well drawn images
good write

john+

Reviewed by Anthony Hall

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

Lady A - Simply loved this poem and the otherworldly images concocted by your spell of words.

I am just glad that my momma raised me to be a gentleman and behave in a manner that would not get me banished in a 'hissing green flame'

Anthony