FREE ROCK CONCERT OF HOPE (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 26, 2004

Great write !!! right on the Nose...-the asthma thang...LOL..

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Pic, looks like the great blues brothers.

Be where of folk bearing free gifts..

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Tambourines and elephants are playing in the band.
Won't you take a ride on the flyin' spoon?
Doo, doo doo.
Wond'rous apparition provided by magician

A little CCR lyrics there, it just kinda fit right in. Least you got music. LOL

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Lady A,

'Rock-on' with this funny and one finely composed write - superb!

Robert

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Lady A,
Enjoyed your humor. Someone once said, " Anything that's free is not worth having."

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Lady A, you rock...this is a very prolific poem, filled with your usual wit and in your face poetry. The message here is clear. Give hope a chance even if it comes in the form of a naked perv stroking his one eyed snake to the beat of Boney M's "hands up, baby hands up, baby your love give me give me your love give me give me...hehehe...sorry just imagining someone crazy enough to dance naked to that one...great poem, great message, great to review it. ((hugs)) Michael

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

concerts have a life to their own ...

i really like your approach to this poem which recants the madness of a free concert ... it's hard when you have been waiting 3 hours and the top act you're seeing is a perv ... anyway, really well written!

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

I can relate to a lot of this. Have been to many concerts. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Very Interesting! Ya never know what crawls out of anything, when it's free!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

This is different - and wild and whacky even for you, Dearheart!! And haven't we all bin there at some time or other? Actually, more times than I care to admit, but - hey! It's good to show solidarity with the spirit of art and expression!! Thoroughly endorse your sentiments about not giving up on Hope... however feeble or loony that seems!! PS Got excited about being given FREE coathangers in the School Shop yesterday - how sad am I!!??? PPS Term starts for me end of the month... I go back to School while you hit the Big Time! How's that goin?! Luv ya! Kate xx

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Very creative. A fun read.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

they don't call 'em rock concerts for nuthin :)

sueb

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Dear Lady A

Plenty of food for thought !! give this one a miss.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Interesting and very creative write! Think I'll skip this concert :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Great write, but I'll pass on this concert!;-)

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

boy, have i ever been there...its never really free but i kinda miss them

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Been there, done that and don't be telling everyone about me naked on stage & if you don't know it already stroking is more fun with an audience...Peace thru Humor, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

(((lady a)))

YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!! this is funny--enjoyed

(((HUGS))) and love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 8, 2004

Anything that is free is worth a look..Lady
Think I will stick to the headphones and choose my own music...Lol
Peter