Back To Bed (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on December 25, 2004

Lol. I know these Mondays all too well !
Best choice you could make!
Sweet write

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2004

"PHUCK OFF .. there's no free rides..."
I stopped and laughed for 3 minutes...rofl

I hope your day improved after all of this...

lol.. I loooooved it... T Y for the entertainment...

D a n a xox

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

the turmoil of dreaming is sometimes unbearable ...

exceptionally crafted poem ...

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

What a scarey nightmare. I loved this the way you wrote the whole thing. Very vivid ! Nice little catchy rythm to it.
God Bless You and Your Family.
Warmest and Happiest of days.
Tracey

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Very cute and clever write, Lady_A. You had me laughing throughout the entire poem. Great job!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Sounds like that crazy mixed up feeling....usually a good sleep puts paid to it...Lol
Peter

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Unusual picture and the poem sort of says it all when we feel that out of whack. Yep somedays getting out of bed ain't what it used to be.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Unique poem. Green Anteater...

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Oh My!! After that I would go back to bed too : )

Woody

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

(((lady a)))

a demented hurricane, eh? keep spinning out prose like this--this is exceptional!!!!!!! BRAVA!

and blow some of that my way :)

enjoyed

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Uniquely created, Anita. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

clever idea.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Fascinating artwork here, Anita. Yep, I'm a fellow-sufferer of MMS- Monday Morning Syndrome. Except you're much more gracious than me - other people get the brunt of my grumpiness, rather than myself! I would agree that normally the alter-ego is obligingly all the things we might wish ourselves to be - but sometimes they give us hell, right? Who IS this person?! You took me there... thank goodness it IS nearly bedtime! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

I told myself to shutup, there was so much to do

I do that to myself all the time, and it's no dream! Sleep Tight.

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Wow, great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Great write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

This is clever and airy, thanks!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

loved it! have felt this way many times;-) great pic and music to match your whirly-words;-)moody monday's;-)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Very cool write, and the picture is neat, too! Well done! (Sounds like my kinda' write; Karla is always fussin' a hissy because I can take one or two naps in a day and STILL get enough sleep while she is as wide awake as a hooty owl; drives her NUTS! LOL)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 29, 2004

Loved it! Loved it! Yeah. It is so much fun when you can just let yourself go and put out things such as this. A masterpiece in its own right, I'm here to tell ya. Great stuff.