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A MAGIC BIRD
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A Magic Bird

 
I am whole, yet halfed by three
The land, the air, and foamy seas
Flora vine upon my back
Fish in schools, my feathers sack
 
Waves of color consequence
On the winds of nature's sense
I walk the voids, I walk the sea
Upon my trails, I drop the seed
 
I leave colors in my wake
My tail, a trail, the rainbow's shake
A magic bird of fantasy
You never see, until I leave
 
Pax
A
February 17, 2009
 
I wrote this poem for this picture I did, it's my first attempt at watercolor painting and I love fantasy art. I am so sorry this picture only loads as a thumbnail, there are so many tiny details in it that cannot be seen in it's current state.
 
 
 
 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "A MAGIC BIRD"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
The picture is beautiful and the poem intruging! Thank you.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
Your magic bird painting is beautiful as is your complementary poem. You're a talented poet and artist.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
The art and poem are a compliment to your artistic talents.Excellent on both accounts. George

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 21, 2009
This poem is every bit as creative as the watercolor painting. The perspective is unique; not a typical approach to the peacock, by any means. Wonderful work:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
i enjoyed it!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
Magical, indeed, Queenie, both painting and poem.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
I enjoy reading this poem and the painting.They are both beautiful.Keep up the great work and the watercolor paintings.Take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Jack Kuperman
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Very good picture and tre poem.
Just a sugestion though, in line 2 to use sea instead of seas? so that you'll get
.I am whole, yet halfed by three
.The land, the air, and foamy sea

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
upon my canvases, regailing in oil colors, there is not the diversity of hues, that flow from the swath of your avian creation --in the light of such creativity, mystery is the master painter -- your work is very creative A PAX -- much peace and love -- JMW

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
A fantastic water color--do more.

Ron

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
So rich and evocative, a force far greater than the sum of parts, metaphysical, goddesslike, ethereal...and wonderfully expressed.
John

Reviewed on February 17, 2009
The painting is absolutely beautiful as is the poem.

Mary

Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Nice!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
I think I'd like to do my bathroom in that same color combination and art...what do ya think? ;-) ed

Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Lady A,

STUNNING package, art and verse: brava!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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