Drenched In YOU (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

Modern animism. I like it.

Adam

Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

This was cool, had me going in another direction at first

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

Refreshingly clever! I also love the graphic.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

delightful wonderful write..Floreann

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

This was great...I loved it, excellent form and poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Lady A this is a lovely piece that flows along swimmingly, very well done...take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

"Drenched In YOU" a true depicting... Emotions and scenery captured and felt by a sage heart.

This inspired poem, "Drenched In YOU" flows beautifully.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Goood one! Makes you wish for a pool.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Teasing write Lady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

keep cool ;)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

lol the cannon ball ah yes! It drenches and refreshes. ;)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Lady A that's not fair to tease! ;O) LOL
Seems I am not the only one you had going here...lol
Such an excellant "trickster" write!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Great teaser! Very nice!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Ha ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaa! You are excellent!!! I love your words. Getting drenched is not a bad thing :) You prove it! The picture is EXCELLENT with this piece! Who hasn't felt this way? Oh yeah, we were talking about swimming right?...LOL! I love your brain!

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Cool write. Wonderfully written.
Kudos!

tony:)

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

This is super, Lady A! Could take it another way, too! smiles...... excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Loved this one! Great write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

EVERYONE INTO THE PYULL...LOL what a refreshing write; i would join ya for a swim, but i can't even FLOAT! and the bad thing is I TOOK LESSONS..THREE TIMES! i am absolutely HOPELESS...:( Enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

(((o, lady a)))

LOLOLOLOL now this is a refreshing dip in the pool

sure can use it it's HOT out there (over 100, feels like a thousand ick ick)

live in gov't apts...can i come take a dip in your pool???

*be careful with the dives*

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla. :) *HUGE grins*