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Evil In the Dust
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EVIL IN THE DUST There's an evil in my home it seems That makes me shriek with silent screams!! I find it throughout every room It mocks me, with a haughty doom! It comes in many shapes and forms To NO dogmas, does it conform I've been defeated countless times It leaves me pained and paralyzed! I am so weak, of will I know And leagues from a domestic pro But when this evil tortures me I close my eyes, and set me free! Buttttttt.... I give it the right to reign!! I'm so ashamed, I can't complain!!! This evil scourge has many names But underneath..... its ALL the same Dust and dirt, dog hair too! Can pin me down, and choke me blue Miles of laundry piled high Just multiply and multiply!!! Things I find, inside my couch Make me grit my teeth and pout Dishes, toys, they're everywhere And make me feel, my home's a lair The VACUUM is the sword I need I drag that cord, and crush the seed The seed of mess, within these walls Ahhhhh Phuck! Its time to clean it all! Okayyyyyyyyyyy.......... Now this DRAMA QUEEN can rest She did her cleaning....... to her best And wear redemption on her crown And stop her BITCHING, all around!!! I so hate being domestic!!!! Anita 10/3/02

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Reviews of "Evil In the Dust"

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

I always wait till the mess is unbearable myself. Much enjoyed.

Adam

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Enjoyed this lovely write!!!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

Woman's work is never done, great write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

Good on you!!

Now this made me really smile!!

Love Tinka!!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

LOL....
Thanks for the laugh...
Great write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Fantastic !! LOL

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Just the pick me up i kinda needed, thanks for the smiles they havent been to many of those lately but this is something i'm stil chuckling to, excellent well written piece, i truly love this, take care of yours and keep up the domestics xx mark xx

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

hi Lady, I thought this was very amusing, quite comical, ty al

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

hhahahaha! Oh man...this made me laugh...and it is something I can relate to...my wife and I sometimes get into tiffs over who is going to do what...not that we like doing house work, but because is necessary...this fun write of yours made my day.

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

let me add one last point, if I may;

Here's why I hate the household chore,
Whenever I try to keep score,
I find that when I think I'll win,
It's time to start it all again!!

go figure.... ;}

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Enjoyed reading this--wonderful creative fun!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Anita, me too. Nice write and have a happy holloween

George

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

But you do it so well!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

but at least you found a fun way of doing it :-) Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Lady A, the chores must get done.

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