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Take My Breath Away
by Bonnie M Torrente → (All Poetry by Bonnie M Torrente)
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~ Take My Breath Away ~


I will breath for you, my Darling,
When the air you have is gone.
I'll climb into your Lilly white bed,
To breath for the life holding on.


Two peas in a pod, you and I are,
Fully able to take off our masks.
To reveal our true nature, our spirit,
Living life in the light we two cast.


Oh we fought,  we tried to gain power,
To control one another...in vain.
Time had its own way of melding,
Us two, to be one in the same.


Now the Angel of Death is approaching,
To escort you to a heavenly place.
Your suffering's thru, peace awaits you 
When our life together ends in embrace

One request before you go my Dearest.
Without you, no need for me to stay
Do one last deed, fill my only need...
Kiss me, and take my breath away.



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 Reviews of "Take My Breath Away"
Reviewed by Michelle Hudson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Wow,This is amazing!
You are so very talented!
Sincerely , Michelle

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 17, 2003
this is a terrific poem, some applause for Bonnie, clap clap clap. peace

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2003
A great poem.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
This is great Bonnie!! Got me all blurry!

Jack

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
WOW, this is goose bumley awesome!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Absolutely beautiful...

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Bonnie,
Wow, you reached into the depths of love and pulled out a diamond.
Thanks for sharing.
This was so special.
John

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Oh my goodness! I got goosebumps! Wonderful poem, Bonnie!

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
This is a beautiful piece.
If fiction, it is fabulously written.
If true, you have my thoughts, prayers, and understanding.
-James

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
So moving Bonnie. This brings tears to the eyes and a lump to the throat!
Beautiful.
Jill :)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
I am speechless...this is so very touching..I would feel the same way completely.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
very nice write..Floreann

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
well penned!!!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
A beautiful tragedy that overcomes even death. Very well written Bonnie. Bill

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Wow this piece is beautifully penned.
Kudos, Bonnie!


tony:)


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