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The Stars Beneath My Feet
by Bonnie M Torrente → (All Poetry by Bonnie M Torrente)
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~ THE STARS BENEATH MY FEET ~

 

I gaze into the evening sky,
And see the twinkling stars.
Like diamonds dancing in the night,
Performing from afar.



Oh so many for my eyes,
To take in every one.
A sparkling blanket covered earth,
Until the night is done.


The universe so round and plump,
Revolving out in space.
Looks just like any other star,
In any other place.



But underneath the turning sphere,
Is more of what's on top!
More sparkling, twinkling, dancing stars,
Beneath my shoes and socks.


I cannot see the stars below,
But still the stars are there.
Shinning just as brightly,
In the darkened blue mid-air.



Surrounding our own universe,
While I am fast asleep,
Dreaming of the shooting stars,
That shine beneath my feet.

 

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 Reviews of "The Stars Beneath My Feet"
Reviewed by The Dove
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
Magnificent! No one but you could have written this! Therefore, I'm humbled by your brilliance. Dove

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
Absolutely beautiful. Thanks for taking me on such an awesome journey!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 31, 2004
Wonderful write!!!!

Reviewed on March 28, 2004
'The Stars Beneath Your Feet'and the pen in the skilled poets hand - great write!


Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
I love this one! Wonderful poem!

Jack

Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
What a beautiful poem and picture..Excellent!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
This is one star of a write ....it twinkles bright loved this I can only imagine stars beneath my feet ........aaaaaaaaah sigh

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
this is breathtaking - and what a beautiful concept - lovely! thank you.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 1, 2003
size is a matter of perspective... gret write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
The stars are my playground, and I love how you write about them Bonnie;-)Wondrous beauty!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Thank You for this lovely picture!

~Joseph

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Oh how I love the stars, and even the ones we can't see.
Love your poems too. :)
John

Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
What a beautiful picture you paint in my mind.

Reviewed by Bill Murray
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
A beautiful way to start the day! Thank you so much Bonnie! Dream on my fairy Princess and bundle of love! Dream on! Bill

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
A very reflective write, and a good one to begin my day with. Thank you.


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