UNDONE ? (poem) by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com on AuthorsDen

UNDONE ?
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INCOMPLETE ? REVERSED ? BROUGHT TO RUIN ?

UNDONE ? © - Tom Hyland - 7/19/13 Remember that last 'Nasty' word you said ... to him/her ... before Death occurred? It can't be 'Undone' - Can it? Remorse? Guilt? Feel Rueful? Wish you had Bitten your Tongue? Too Late Now! Or maybe it was something ... you Did, rather than Said? Were you Spiteful because your 'Feelings were Hurt'? It seems that 'When All is Said and Done' ... The Past is Over ... It Cannot be Changed! It Can't be Undone! Just this past Tuesday afternoon ... My Niece Bernie and I were trying to remember ... "The Seven Deadly Sins." After having to 'Google' on my Android ... We found that Last one we had forgotten ... LECHERY! We had called it Covetousness ... Like "Thy Neighbor's "? And ... where we had picked Anger ... The Old, Original word was 'Wrath.' In an attempt to remember them ... I made up a Mnemonic ... AGELAPS ... Anger - Gluttony- Envy - Lechery - Avarice - Pride - Sloth ... OR ... Substituting Wrath for Anger ... And ... Greed for Avarice ... We get ... WPLEGGS ... Wrath - Pride - Lechery - Envy - Gluttony - Greed - Sloth ... Choose The One You Like! UNDONE ? What Else May Be Undone? How about ROUND-TUITS ? You know ... Those 'Things' You Were ... 'Gon'na Do' ... SOMEDAY! Go on a Diet! Lose Weight! Exercise! Sound Familiar? Still Undone? Why? There's Always ... Tomorrow ... Manana! Right? Reminds me of a Banner I had many years ago ... "THY ACTIONS ALONE DETERMINE THY WORTH!" Can You Change? ... Will You? I Wonder ... (C) - TKH.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 21, 2013

Anyone can change be it his physique, attitude, etc.. It's all in the decision he makes.(or she)

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

I now often wonder if it's already too late to change.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 20, 2013

I like round tuits, where can I get some?

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

But, cuz, will YOU change...no more smoking, drinking etc...though I think that may be what is keeping old farts like you alive, in the long run...disease wants nothing to do with your smoke & alcohol ridden body...e

Reviewed by John Domino

Thank you Tom for this poetic and humorous reminder.

Start the day with prayer and He will direct our paths.

To go on in life any other way is like throwing a rock in the water and hoping that it will float!

May peace be with you, love surround you and blessings abound you,

JMD

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 19, 2013

The devil thinks he has all the cards