A philosophical write that ponders the question "Is perfection good for us?" Perhaps heaven can only be reached when you've been through hell.
Long ago and faraway where all good tales began in a land of plenty not marred by thinking man No poverty or sickness, no anger, greed or hate Time was not the master and folk were never late Utopian land of dreams Heavenly place to some To one man it seemed tedious “A paradise for the dumb.” “Not for those who question or rise to seize the day, No challenges to stretch their minds” was what he’d like to say. Others seemed content in the endless glow of sun but the wise man prayed most earnestly that it would come undone He grew tired of endless day and longed for the contrast of night because ‘Only after darkness can they hope to see the light.’ He looked upon the people grown complacent, soft and fat “Nothing more and nothing less. What’s a ball without a bat?” There’s no competition When everyone agrees Surrounded by perfection what could they hope to see? A better world is found in balanced black and white Growth can only happen through challenges in life. Hearts and minds grow stronger when they bravely bear the load How can one develop with only one choice of road?"
Excellent, Excellent, Excellent, Chanti. It is through difficulty that we learn and grow. Perfection would be like water standing too long, it would become stagnant and all life within it would cease to exist.
Take care,
Sherry
One is not measured by the paths available to choose...
One is only measured by the paths one chooses.
What diatribe is this; and why pray tell the fuss?
We know that Fate is in control...
When at last the path... it chooses us. -- Jeff
Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2006
Now this is the writtings of a 'thinker'. Someone brave enough to look beyond the veil of ig-norance and consider the wisest ideas as the simplest of schemes. I think to call it a parable but the thought of the poets poem is self-explanatory on its own. I really enjoyed this. Please keep challenging that talented mind of yours and stir those of us who sometimes finds our selves in complacement. My best to you always.
I agree that perfection can only be understood and appreciated when contrasted with the depths of hell. If we only had one beautiful path stretching out ahead of us, I doubt we'd enjoy it or receive it as a blessing. It would be status quo, ho-hum, yawn...But when we've been through the fire, only then can we know what a relief, what a joy, what an amazing gift that beauty can be. This is a wonderfully well crafted poem, and I love the title too. Well put! Love, Michelle
Oh, no, dear Chanti, perfection is the absolute worst thing that can happen. We need bumps in the road and warts on the soul in order to fight the fight for betterment. I firmly believe that we see people who live perfect lives going out of their way to shock and scandalize for no other reason than to say,, "Hey! Look at me. I have problems . . . just . . . like . . . you!" Paris Hilton comes to mind. There are more. Good, as you said, philosophical poetry.
Chanti
You write with a profound intensity from the bottom of your heart, a heart that has experienced what it narrates, this is the best and most sincere kind of verse that transcends all doubt and duplicity !
Through raw and unshackled experience we learn to carry our cross in life with dignity and grace...
Love and Harmony
Peter
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2006
Brilliance, courage is born championing fear.
Great message for mankind to hear too. A cut above write.
One to read often...
This is a poem that truly bears reading over and over. As I once jokingly referred to the idea of heaven as presented in religion what fun would I have there if there are no bad girls to play with. Anyway this is truly a great piece and would be wonderful for a pshyce class to ponder. Nice to have you back again.
Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about.
You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached.
Deciding what is the core of belief.
This book is about a radical transformational Way of Insight, Awakening and Realization to transcendent Self of Nondual Consciousness. If your're interested in transcendental Enlightenment, in Awakening to Nondual Self of Wisdom and Compassion, then
This book presents a narrative story of one person's journey of transcendental Awakening and Enlightenment as guided by his two Sage companions. It is grounded in Zen Buddhist and Taoist perspective and uses the I Ching as its structural framework. T
Take care,
Sherry
One must first understand sorrow
to understand joy. ;) I think.
Regis
eT
love tinka
One is only measured by the paths one chooses.
What diatribe is this; and why pray tell the fuss?
We know that Fate is in control...
When at last the path... it chooses us. -- Jeff
You write with a profound intensity from the bottom of your heart, a heart that has experienced what it narrates, this is the best and most sincere kind of verse that transcends all doubt and duplicity !
Through raw and unshackled experience we learn to carry our cross in life with dignity and grace...
Love and Harmony
Peter
Great message for mankind to hear too. A cut above write.
One to read often...
Hugs to you, my friend.
Tami
Felix